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Complain the pothole due to the laying cable for telecom services

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Paweesuda Natewong residing in 87 Knowles Cres, Regina. I would like to draw your attention to the pothole in our area which was due to the laying cable for telecom services. Our residents have informed the telecom authorities many times but they are reluctant to repair the road. The telecom authorities dug deep holes to enhance their services but they did not repair the road after completing their work. Only half of the road is available for use resulting in traffic during peak office hours. The rainy season has started, and water clogs in the pothole and the transformer beside it has wires which extent till the pothole and into the water creating unsafe conditions. Many people find it difficult to use the road at night. I would suggest you take immediate action to repair the damage road. I would really appreciate your help in this regard. Yours Sincerely, Paweesuda Natewong
Dear Sir/Madam, I am
Paweesuda
Natewong
residing in 87 Knowles
Cres
, Regina. I would like to draw your attention to the pothole in our area which was due to the laying cable for telecom services. Our residents have informed the telecom authorities
many
times
but
they are reluctant to repair the
road
. The telecom authorities dug deep holes to enhance their services
but
they did not repair the
road
after completing their work.
Only
half of the
road
is available for
use
resulting in traffic during peak office hours. The rainy season has
started
, and water clogs in the pothole and the transformer beside it has wires which extent till the pothole and into the water creating unsafe conditions.
Many
people
find it difficult to
use
the
road
at night. I would suggest you take immediate action to repair the damage
road
. I would
really
appreciate your
help
in this regard. Yours
Sincerely
,
Paweesuda
Natewong
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IELTS letter Complain the pothole due to the laying cable for telecom services

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  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
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