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You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter, In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. beg v.1

You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter, In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. beg v. 1
There is no scepticism that education liberates the masses from prejudice, discrimination and unawareness. So, to developing the recession, fiscal has been utilized for teaching technical education instead of other subjects by the authority. However, I think in reverse manner and disagree with a given statement. Indeed, I accord that all subjects should be taught to learners whose reasons I will discuss in subsequent paragraphs. Elucidating the aspect, there are ample, powerful and daily evidences that each subject has its own role to boost the recession. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, unless bureaucrats should invest in all subjects, then there are certain pupils who have had no interest in scientific subjects, could not contribute to the growth of the economy. In other words, one biggest factor of learning is interest which is distinct among pupils. For instance, a research by the UK has been shown that almost half percentile of learners is less likely worth in fetch technical knowledge lack of interest. Eventually, to invest money solely in one subject is not only notorious for learners but recession also. What is more, it is not one factor which had a better nation to grow. In fact, there are some other factors such as an artist's contribution. To be specific, almost 50% progress of the country depends on artists who provide both exorbitant amounts of tax to statue officials and show the culture of the native country to others. For example, in Kerela, government collects almost 30% tariff from the artist. Therefore, the government should make their base, strong by giving proficiency of other subjects. Illuminating the benefit of technique subject, scientific philosophy aid in to keep up-to-date with latest technology; learn more about health issues and find their solutions. To cite an example, the epidemic ailment flu has been found in 2010 which has been cured by experimenting with depth scientific ability. However, despite of expenditure on science subjects are indispensable, nevertheless, not at the expense of other subjects. Ergo, all subjects are fruitful to be invested by the regime. In compendium, it can be reiterated that, albeit scientific power assist in sorting of the myriad of quandary, but other subjects has been never been neglected. Indeed, the administration would promote all subjects to boost the economy.
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scepticism
that education liberates the masses from prejudice, discrimination and unawareness.
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So
, to developing the recession, fiscal has
been utilized
for teaching technical education
instead
of
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other
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subjects
by the authority.
However
, I
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think
in reverse manner and disagree with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
statement.
Indeed
, I accord that all
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subjects
should
be taught
to learners whose reasons I will discuss in subsequent paragraphs.

Elucidating the aspect, there are ample, powerful and daily evidences that each
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subject
has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
role to boost the recession. The central reason behind this is twofold,
firstly
, unless bureaucrats should invest in all
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subjects
, then there are certain pupils who have had no interest in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
, could not contribute to the growth of the economy. In
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other
words, one biggest factor of learning is interest which is distinct among pupils.
For instance
,
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "research".
a research
by the UK has
been shown
that almost half percentile of learners is less likely worth in fetch technical knowledge lack of interest.
Eventually
, to invest money
solely
in one
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subject
is not
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only
notorious for learners
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but
recession
also
.

What is more
, it is not one factor which had a better nation to grow. In fact, there are
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some
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other
factors such as an artist's contribution. To be specific, almost 50% progress of the country depends on artists who provide both exorbitant amounts of tax to statue officials and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
the culture of the native country to others.

For example
, in
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Kerela
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
collects almost 30% tariff from the artist.
Therefore
, the
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government
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their base, strong by giving proficiency of
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other
subjects.

Illuminating the benefit of technique
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subject
,
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scientific
philosophy aid in to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up-to-date with
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
technology; learn more about health issues and find their solutions. To cite an example, the epidemic ailment flu has
been found
in 2010 which has
been cured
by experimenting with depth
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scientific
ability.
However
,
Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
despite of
expenditure on science
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subjects
are indispensable,
nevertheless
, not at the expense of
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other
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subjects
. Ergo, all
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subjects
are fruitful to
be invested
by the regime.

In compendium, it can
be reiterated
that, albeit
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scientific
power assist in sorting of the myriad of quandary,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
has been never
been neglected
.
Indeed
, the administration would promote all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
to boost the economy.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter, In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. beg v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
380 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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