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Writing an informal email to invite my friends for a party

PARTY INVITATION To-Manan1010@gmail. com Subject- Birthday Bash Hi Manan, Since you’re the class representative, I’m writing this to you for inviting the whole class to my birthday party. As all of you know my birthday is approaching and I’m damn sure you guys would never mind a party coming to your way? So congratulations I’m throwing a one. Third Saturday of February sounds good to me, I don’t think anyone will disagree? When it comes to the venue, I’m still looking for it. The Party will start from 7: 00 PM and will end only when the sun rises. There are many ideas regarding the party are floating in my mind which also includes the cuisine to be served there? I’m thinking about Chinese and Italian cuisine, I’m open for suggestions and obviously there will be no room for alcohol in the party and as you all are aware that I have zero tolerance policy for illegal stuff. I hope you guys are getting my point. I have planned many activities which will keep you all engaged and many games are on the cards as well and of course the non-stop dance will going to be the soul of this party. You guys should not worry about pick-up and drop. I’ll take care of that. The only thing you guys should worry about is seeking permission from your respective parents? So I’m leaving you with this task and rest is on me. I’ll make sure that you guys will have the time of your life. I’m really looking forward and excited to host you guys. All the best, Pankaj
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Subject- Birthday Bash

Hi
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Manan
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Since you’re the
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class
representative, I’m writing this to you

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for
inviting the whole
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class
to my birthday party.

As all of you know my birthday is
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approaching and
I’m damn

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sure
you
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guys
would never mind a
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party
coming to your way?

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congratulations I’m throwing a one.

Third Saturday of February sounds
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good
to me, I don’t
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think


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anyone
will disagree? When it
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comes
to the venue, I’m
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still


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looking
for it. The
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Party
will
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start
from 7: 00 PM and will
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end


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only
when the sun rises.

There are
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many
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ideas
regarding the
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party
are floating in my

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mind
which
also
includes the cuisine to
be served
there? I’
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m


thinking about Chinese and Italian cuisine, I’m open for

suggestions and
obviously
there will be no room for alcohol

in the
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party
and as you all are aware that I have zero

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tolerance
policy for illegal stuff. I hope you
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guys
are
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getting


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my
point. I have planned
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many
activities which will
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keep
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you


all engaged and
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games are on the cards
as well
and of

course the non-
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dance will
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going
to be the soul of this

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party
. You
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guys
should not worry about pick-up and drop. I’
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ll


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take
care of that. The
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only
thing you
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guys
should worry
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about


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is
seeking permission from your respective parents?
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So
I’m leaving you with this task and rest is on me. I’ll
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make
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sure


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that
you
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guys
will have the time of your life.

I’m
really
looking forward and excited to host you guys.

All the best,

Pankaj
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IELTS essay Writing an informal email to invite my friends for a party

Essay
  American English
26 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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