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I felt nervous when the phone rang, because of my mother. It was parent teacher meeting's day. This semester my grades are lower than last semester so I worried that my mom will be disappointed in me. At home, I was very worried about what my teacher told my mother about me. before she went back home, she had called me. When i picked up the phone, i thought that she will mad at me but no, she talked slowly with a warm voice and said I don't need to be worry I had been doing my best and I can get a great mark next semester

I felt nervous when the phone rang, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my mother. It was parent teacher meeting's day. This semester my grades are lower than last semester This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I worried that my mom will be disappointed
 in me. At home, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 worried about what my teacher This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 my mother about me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 she went back home, she had called me. When Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 picked up the phone, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that she will mad at me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 no, she talked slowly
 with a warm voice and said I don't need to be worry I had been doing my best and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a great mark next
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semester