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Write an essay on the advantages and dis advantages of small and large families.

Write an essay on the advantages and dis advantages of small and large families. yXY2V
As the population of people increase, individuals have recently begun to heatedly discuss benefits and drawbacks of nuclear or crowded families. This essay will demonstrate the minus of small families and the positive sides of big families. Being members of big families and a little family plays a crucial role in child psychologies. If a child had a lot of brothers and sisters, he could be pleased at finding a friend easily to play a game. For example, many psychologists claim that, nowadays, a vast of majority children, who are our future, cannot a friend to play a game neither inside nor outside and have to spend their time with a mobile phone or TV. This problem affects them profoundly. Thus, growing in a huge family is undeniably effortless to find a person to look after you. On the other hand, a small family is woefully inadequate to be satisfactory. Therefore, members of the families would not even connect with each other as they see each other every day and face the same issues. For instance, I am in a small family and it is not said to chat, because we tell the same story. Hence, when having more siblings provide with a lot of story about their job or schools. Conclusion, in this essay, it shows whether big families have beneficial effects or small families' drawback effects. As people need the others, the more siblings, the more people supporting each other. Ramifications indicated, all of dilemmas. Furthermore, I told them
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people
increase, individuals have recently begun to
heatedly
discuss benefits and drawbacks of nuclear or crowded
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families
. This essay will demonstrate the minus of
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small
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families
and the
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positive
sides of
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big
families.

Being members of
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big
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families
and a
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little
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family
plays a crucial role in child psychologies. If a child had
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a lot of
brothers and sisters, he could be
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pleased
at finding a friend
easily
to play a game.
For example
,
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many
psychologists claim that, nowadays, a vast of majority children, who are our future, cannot a friend to play a game neither inside nor outside and
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have to
spend their time with a mobile phone or TV. This problem affects them
profoundly
.
Thus
, growing in a huge
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family
is
undeniably
effortless to find a person to look after you.

On the
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other
hand, a
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small
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family
is
woefully
inadequate to be satisfactory.
Therefore
, members of the
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families
would not even connect with each
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other
as they
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see
each
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other
every day and face the same issues.
For instance
, I am in a
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small
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family
and it is not said to chat,
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because
we
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tell
the same story.
Hence
, when having more siblings provide with
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a lot of story
about their job or schools.

Conclusion, in this essay, it
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shows
whether
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big
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families
have beneficial effects or
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small
families' drawback effects. As
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people
need the others, the more siblings, the more
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people
supporting each
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other
. Ramifications indicated,
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all of dilemmas
.
Furthermore
, I
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told
them
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IELTS essay Write an essay on the advantages and dis advantages of small and large families.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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