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Thirdly, reading books helps us relax and release stress. When we are reading books, we are often silent, we stop thinking about everything, so we can rest and enjoy it. Some kinds of books such as comic books or romantic novels can make us happier and get out of the worries in our mind. Finally, reading every day can improve our communication skills because books provide many new vocabularies and every sentence in the book is chosen carefully by the author. Therefore, we will have many words to use when talking and expressing our opinions. In conclusion/in short, reading books is beneficial and good for us. It not only improves our memory, focus or comunication skills but helps also us reduce stress. Futhermore, Reading allows us to learn new things and widen our knowledge. Do you plan to read books every day after this article?
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, we are
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silent, we
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stop
thinking about everything,
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so
we can rest and enjoy it.
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Some
kinds of
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books
such as comic
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books
or romantic novels can
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make
us happier and
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get
out of the worries in our mind.
Finally
,
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reading
every day can
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improve
our communication
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skills
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because
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books
provide
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many
new vocabularies and every sentence in the
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is chosen
carefully
by the author.
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, we will have
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words to
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use
when talking and expressing our opinions.
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reading
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is beneficial and
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good
for us. It not
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improves
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comunication
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skills
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helps
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us
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reduce
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stress
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Futhermore
,
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Reading
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allows
us to learn new things and widen our knowledge. Do you plan to read
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every day after this article?
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IELTS essay write an essay about the advantages of reading books

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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