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Languages are the most important part of each person. Thank to languages ensue we can communicate easier. One of the most popular languages in the world is English that I am studying. Thus, I decided to learn another language to enrich my language source. This is Chinese-the language which is studied no less than English. The majority reason that make me choose Chinese is it benefits my future career. Nowadays, it is not difficult to see a China company or industrial area one. Thus, If I know their language I may have more chances to get the job at this company. For example: In an interview, if you influence about two languages above, interviewers will get more good impression with you. Therefore, you have more chances to be received. The last reason is I extremely excited with China’s culture. These cultures supremely various such as having numerous kinds of food; traditional clothes; dancing; various histories… and so on. One of my dreams is visiting China, and I believe that it will be easier to travel if I understand what native persons say. Moreover, I am going to save a lot of money to hire a tourist guide. In stead of it, I will spend that money to buy some foods; some clothes or gifts for my family and friends. I am a person who excited to learn languages, so I will study as the most as I can. But I am going to learn Chinese first because it will help me a lot in my future job. To study different languages is not difficult if you have enough aspiration to learn by heart.
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languages
ensue we can communicate easier. One of the most popular
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languages
in the world is English that I am studying.
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, I decided to
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learn
another
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language
to enrich my
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language
source. This is Chinese-the
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language
which
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make
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language
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more
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impression with you.
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on. One of my dreams is visiting China, and I believe that it will be easier to travel if I understand what native persons say.
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languages
,
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IELTS essay write about the languages that you want to learn in the future

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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