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Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in store shopping

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In the present world technology is more
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deve loped
in addition
to that
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feople
addict for easier to
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buy
anythings.
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the
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internetas
well, do not go
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to
much
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Shapping
in-store
However
, I believe that it has benefits and I will discuss why.
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more
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online
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shopping
popular than in-store more
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Shopping
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Firtly
, one of main their
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time
advantage is
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people
can save
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because
,
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online
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ying
things
Use only "easier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more easier
. We do that any
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time
and the any place of
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shaps
can
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people
ere not needed to 1ots and
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check
go brand
as well
, compare price range
easily
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because
of that i They can
Further
they save lots.
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of
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time
.
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able
to
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buy
anything from any brand in
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ane
are site within.
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one
or two
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minuts
Moreover
, the second
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cheap
deals and better price major reason is in
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online
for example
,
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Ebay
mainly
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becaus
, they have
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not^showrnom
are available shops
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Aliexpress
and
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Amarson
Cost and more employees
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Salery
in addition
to that they are
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posible
to
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given
more deals and better price.

Not
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anly
that, it is for easier option to
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send
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firends
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Lany
county
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any where
and
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relatiwes
and
that is
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important
for
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Some
occasions
for instance
, and birthdays weddings.
Capitalize holidays.
father's day
. '
Capitalize holidays.
mother's day
also
have
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Shopping
that the
on the other hand
,
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online
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Some
drawbacks.
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believe
main problem.
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is
. able to
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check
materials and
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colours
we are not
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posible
to
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seen
that face to
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because
we are not
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only
photos and
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videns
for a long face
as well
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ast
can
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see
we
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Vloreover
,
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Sometimes
we
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have to
wait
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time
for our
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oder
and damage delivered to the or
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get
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wreng
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add ress
.
To conclude
, I believe that
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online
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shoppin
is way to
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buyy
things and save
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time
and
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easierst
items our money.
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we
in a single day and that the
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se
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buy
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manydifferent
can without go outside.
Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
so
I
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thiink
more effect
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fro
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popu lar
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online
reasons
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
in the present.
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IELTS essay Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in store shopping

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
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