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Students should be free to choose study or play games. They should be allowed to manage their own time . Do you agree or disagree?

Students should be free to choose study or play games. They should be allowed to manage their own time. x86dQ
It is very difficult for that students to spend their time as well as manage it. however some people deem that they should be free. I will agree with it and points will discussed furtherCommencing with several Reasons. firstly they can learn mistakes which increase their mind ability moreover they will make more efforts In addition too to this. They know very well abput their ability and how much time they need To conclude it is stated that it is important for them to manage their time by their own choice
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difficult for that students to spend their time
as well
as manage it.
however
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some
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people
deem that they should be free. I will
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agree
with it and points will discussed
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furtherCommencing
with several Reasons.
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firstly
they can learn mistakes which increase their mind ability
moreover
they will
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make
more efforts
In addition
too to this. They know
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very
well
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abput
their ability and how much time they need
To conclude
it
is stated
that it is
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important
for them to manage their time by their
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own
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IELTS essay Students should be free to choose study or play games. They should be allowed to manage their own time.

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  American English
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90 words
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