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Write about the family members of your and the person to whom you like the most.

Write about the family members of your and the person to whom you like the most. 53lNN

There are nine members in my family including me and we are living together as a joint family. My mother is the person to whom, i like the most among the family members. She is a teacher of a primary school and also a good cook. Every kinds of food is cooked by her always taste. She takes care about us and helps us by providing good suggestions to overcome all types of problems. She always remains patient in any critical situation. In my opinion, she is perfect as a teacher, mother, and motivational speaker. The person whose mother is no more, he is very unlucky. Actually, I'm very thankful to the almighty Allah for to have my mother. Really, I'm proud of her. At the end, i must say that i can't live without her. She is my world and pride.

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mother
 is the person to whom, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 like the most among the family members. She is a teacher of a primary school and also
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helps
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 suggestions to overcome all types of problems. She always remains patient in any critical situation. In my opinion, she is perfect as a teacher, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
, and motivational speaker. The person whose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
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 thankful to the almighty Allah for to have my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
. Really
, I'm proud of her. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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must
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live
 without her. She is my world and pride. 