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Write about the family members of your and the person to whom you like the most.

Write about the family members of your and the person to whom you like the most. 53lNN
There are nine members in my family including me and we are living together as a joint family. My mother is the person to whom, i like the most among the family members. She is a teacher of a primary school and also a good cook. Every kinds of food is cooked by her always taste. She takes care about us and helps us by providing good suggestions to overcome all types of problems. She always remains patient in any critical situation. In my opinion, she is perfect as a teacher, mother, and motivational speaker. The person whose mother is no more, he is very unlucky. Actually, I'm very thankful to the almighty Allah for to have my mother. Really, I'm proud of her. At the end, i must say that i can't live without her. She is my world and pride.
There are nine members in my family including
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
me and
we are living together as a joint family. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
is the person to whom,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
like the most among the family members. She is a teacher of a primary school and
also
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
cook. Every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "kind"?
kinds
of food
Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "are".
is
cooked by her always taste. She takes care about us and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
us by providing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
suggestions to overcome all types of problems. She always remains patient in any critical situation. In my opinion, she is perfect as a teacher,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
, and motivational speaker. The person whose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
is no more, he is
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very
unlucky. Actually, I'm
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
thankful to the almighty Allah for to have my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mother
.
Really
, I'm proud of her. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
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must
say that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
without her. She is my world and pride.

IELTS essay Write about the family members of your and the person to whom you like the most.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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