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Write a five-paragraph essay in which you classify the types of friends you have.

Write a five-paragraph essay in which you classify the types of friends you have. QLRlx
In a newly survey, the happiness is claimed to be attributed to the friends by the majority of the respondents. By and large, there are eight main genres of friends; however, the most common ones are discussed in this essay. First, it is absolutely the loyal best friend. Sometimes a loyal best friend is the only thing people need to stay sane. Everyone needs a non-judgmental friend who will support them no matter what. This is the kind of friend who lets people be a hot mess and know all of their deepest and darkest secrets, but still loves them all the same. Furthermore, a wise mentor is probably never out of the list. Jesse Jackson once said, “Never look down on someone unless you’re helping them up. ” If having someone smart, inspiring, and admirable in life who practices this philosophy, this people are acutely lucky. It can be clearly seen that all the needs for a friend who inspires individuals to be better ones without making them feel inadequate. Plus, being around such a person will challenge individuals to better ourselves every day. Moreover, the wise mentor in life does not have to be someone who shares the same occupation or hobbies with them. It is simply someone who has a few steps ahead of people in life and has enough wisdom and patience to guide them in the right direction. Ergo, tt can be anyone — a colleague, a friend who is beyond their years, or an older neighbour — as long as people look up to this person and want to be more like them. Last, this world is extremely huge and people all need a fearless adventurer. Because of living in a big world where there are so many places to see, people to meet, and experiences to be had, yet so many of them are stuck in their own routines and forget to, well, live. As a consequence, people all need an adventurous friend who will pull them out of their shells and introduce them to new ideas, cultures, philosophies, and activities. All above types of friends discussed, life is the melting pot for the varity of genre of friend and each one makes people be complete. Notwithstanding the differences, this in conjunction brings people the entire happiness.
In a
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, the happiness
is claimed
to
be attributed
to the
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friends
by the majority of the respondents. By and large, there are eight main genres of
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friends
;
however
, the most common
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ones
are discussed
in this essay.

First
, it is
absolutely
the loyal best
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friend
.
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Sometimes
a loyal best
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friend
is the
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only
thing
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people
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need
to stay sane. Everyone
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needs
a non-judgmental
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friend
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who
will support them no matter what. This is the kind of
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friend
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who
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lets
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people
be a hot mess and know all of their deepest and darkest secrets,
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but
still
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loves
them all the same.

Furthermore
, a wise mentor is
probably
never out of the list. Jesse Jackson once said, “Never look down on
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someone
unless you’re helping them up. ” If having
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someone
smart, inspiring, and admirable in
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life
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who
practices this philosophy, this
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people
are
acutely
lucky. It can be
clearly
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seen
that all the
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needs
for a
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friend
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who
inspires individuals to be better
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ones
without making them feel inadequate. Plus, being around such a person will challenge individuals to better ourselves every day.

Moreover
, the wise mentor in
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life
does not
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have to
be
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someone
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who
shares the same occupation or hobbies with them. It is
simply
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someone
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who
has a few steps ahead of
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people
in
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life
and has
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enough
wisdom and patience to guide them in the right direction. Ergo,
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tt
can be anyone — a colleague, a
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friend
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who
is beyond their years, or an older
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neighbour
— as long as
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people
look up to this person and want to be more like them.

Last, this world is
extremely
huge and
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people
all
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need
a fearless adventurer.
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Because
of living in a
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big
world where there are
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so
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many
places to
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see
,
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people
to
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meet
, and experiences to
be had
,
yet
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so
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many
of them
are stuck
in their
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own
routines and forget to, well,
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live
. As a consequence,
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people
all
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need
an adventurous
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friend
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who
will pull them out of their shells and introduce them to new
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ideas
, cultures, philosophies, and activities.

All above types of
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friends
discussed,
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life
is the melting pot for the
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varity
of genre of
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friend
and each one
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makes
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people
be complete. Notwithstanding the differences, this in conjunction brings
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people
the entire happiness.
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IELTS essay Write a five-paragraph essay in which you classify the types of friends you have.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
384 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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