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Work-life balance has perennially been a topic of public interest given that the majority of modern citizens have been striving for the harmony.

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Work-life balance has perennially been a topic of public interest given that the majority of modern citizens have been striving for the harmony. This, however, has never been considered an easy task for most people. In this essay, I will cite several underlying reasons to this issue and sound proposals to address it. There are some justifications for the misbalance among the bulk of people. To begin with, in this day and age, many people are either snowed under with colossal workload or work odd shifts, which leave them a little “me time” and quality time for their beloved ones. Given that financial burdens that they have been bearing, switch to more cushy jobs is seemingly not a feasible move, probably causing them being trapped in a vicious circle. Another reason could be the low productivity of employees, particularly entry-level and junior ones, which the inadequacy of expertise and essential skills could be to blame for. These people often spend more time than expected getting an assigned task done. Some measures should be applied in an endeavor to reach their desired balance. Firstly, those whose work intensity hinders them from regularly doing their life activities should build passive income streams; in other words, they are better off creating a source of revenue that they receive without active involvement. Granted, It is not an easy feat because more often than not, it is beyond their field. This measure, however, is arguably the most effective one in the long run, as evidenced by the wealth and happiness of millionaires worldwide. Secondly, instead of working hard, people should work smart to reduce working time through equipping themselves with more job-related skills. This, as a result, would free them up to enjoy their personal lives. In conclusion, I opine that work-life misbalance is attributed to the intensive work and prolonged working time. The key to address this problem is that people should work on their productivity and passive income source.
Work-life balance has
perennially
been a topic of public interest
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given
that the majority of modern citizens have been striving for the harmony. This,
however
, has never
been considered
an easy task for most
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people
. In this essay, I will cite several underlying reasons to this issue and sound proposals to address it.

There are
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some
justifications for the
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misbalance
among the bulk of
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people
. To
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begin
with, in this day and age,
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many
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people
are either snowed under with colossal workload or
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work
odd shifts, which
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leave
them a
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little
“me
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time”
and quality
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time
for their beloved
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ones
.
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Given
that financial burdens that they have been bearing, switch to more cushy jobs is
seemingly
not a feasible
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move
,
probably
causing them
being trapped
in a vicious circle. Another reason could be the low productivity of employees,
particularly
entry-level and junior
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ones
, which the inadequacy of expertise and essential
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skills
could be to blame for. These
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people
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often
spend more
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time
than
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expected
getting an assigned task done.

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Some
measures should
be applied
in an endeavor to reach their desired balance.
Firstly
, those whose
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work
intensity hinders them from
regularly
doing their life activities should build passive income streams;
in other words
, they are better off creating a source of revenue that they receive without active involvement. Granted, It is not an easy feat
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because
more
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often
than not, it is beyond their field. This measure,
however
, is
arguably
the most effective one in the long run, as evidenced by the wealth and happiness of millionaires worldwide.
Secondly
,
instead
of working
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hard
,
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people
should
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work
smart to
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reduce
working
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time
through equipping themselves with more job-related
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skills
. This,
as a result
, would free them up to enjoy their personal
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lives
.

In conclusion
, I opine that work-life
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misbalance
is attributed
to the intensive
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work
and prolonged working
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time
. The key to address this problem is that
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people
should
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work
on their productivity and passive income source.
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IELTS essay Work-life balance has perennially been a topic of public interest given that the majority of modern citizens have been striving for the harmony.

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326 words
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