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With the increasing popularity of computers and calculators, student literacy is decreasing dramatically. What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology has brought about?

With the increasing popularity of computers and calculators, student literacy is decreasing dramatically. What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology has brought about? 2b6g6
These Days, Technology has superior enhancement towards computer and calculators and plenty of devices Thus it leads to all of us to work not just faster but as a finest way like as cool as cucumber. It has many pros and cons regarding about technology. This essay will show negative and positive effect of modern technology. Firstly, It has plethora of positive outcome for a school children that they can work their school work at home or during school time period if a children have own computer at home. Thought they can easily solve mathematical problems due to calculators and quickly assimilate particular topic or information on computer perfectly. Thus student can work smartly through using a computer or calculator end they never feeling blue during homework or school work. So this is some advantages for undergraduate pupils that they can take from technology. Secondly, it also have plenty of disadvantages that they give affection on particular pupil ability like they are unable to work on own and calculate some mathematics expression as using of technology they feel necessity to use device to overcome this kind of situation thus they loose ability without working electronic component. Technology is making work smarter but also making human dumb. Furthermore it’s a bad habit for a person to use technology at every simple or draconian situation. To Sum Up, Technology has a both side positive or negative but a person to have learn both use and without use of technology and develop work efficiency in both field.
These Days,
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Technology
has superior enhancement

towards computer and calculators and
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plenty
of devices

Thus
it leads to all of us to
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work
not
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just
faster
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but
as a

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finest
way like as cool as cucumber. It has
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many
pros
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and


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cons
regarding about
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technology
. This essay will
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show


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negative
and
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positive
effect of modern technology.

Firstly
, It has plethora of
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positive
outcome for a school

children that they can
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work
their school
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work
at home or

during school time period if
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a children
have
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own


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computer
at home.
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Thought
they can
easily
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solve


mathematical problems due to calculators and
quickly


assimilate particular topic or information on computer

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perfectly
.
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Thus
student can
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work
smartly
through using
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a


computer or calculator
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end
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they never feeling
blue

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during
homework or school
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work
.
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So
this is
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some


advantages for undergraduate pupils that they can take

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from
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technology
.
Secondly
, it
also
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have
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plenty
of disadvantages that they

give affection on particular pupil ability like they are

unable to
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work
on
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own
and calculate
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some
mathematics

expression as using of
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technology
they feel necessity to

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use
device to overcome this kind of situation
thus
they

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loose
ability without working electronic component.

Technology is making
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work
smarter
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but
also
making

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human
dumb.
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Furthermore
it’s a
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bad
habit for a
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person


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to
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use
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technology
at every simple or
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draconian
situation.

To Sum Up,
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Technology
has a both side
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positive
or

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negative
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but
a person to have
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learn
both
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use
and without

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use
of
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technology
and develop
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work
efficiency in both

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field
.
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IELTS essay With the increasing popularity of computers and calculators, student literacy is decreasing dramatically. What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology has brought about?

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