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why south african team not manage to win the worldcup

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In the 1996 World Cup, South Africa had won all the group matches and reached the Quarter-final. It was against west indies. Brain Lara was the highest scorer in that match and made 111 runs in 94 balls. The west indies team managed to put a total of 264 runs on the board. South Africa got an excellent start and reached 186/3. Afterwhich, they lost the remaining 8 wickets in just 59 runs and lost the match. Their dream to win the world cup would remain to continue.
In the 1996 World Cup, South Africa had won all the group matches and reached the Quarter-final. It was against west indies. Brain Lara was the highest scorer in that match and made 111 runs in 94 balls. The west indies team managed to put a total of 264 runs on the board. South Africa
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59 runs and lost the match. Their dream to win the world cup would remain to continue.
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IELTS essay why south african team not manage to win the worldcup

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