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Why I want to live in Australia

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I would like to live in Australia because the quality life is far better than Spain and infinitely better than Chile. People always says that, Australia is the best country to live, make money, but they say that the people who lives there are a little complicates, i don’t know if it’s true or false, but i got friends that their family goes to Australia and say this. Is not because Carlos told me, lol. I wanna see me in the situation to leave the country and try to work, study and live in another country, I always wanted to travel a lot and travel to Australia would be my third trip to another country. . and stay there for live! I’m so excited. And i will go with my girlfriend, it’s one of my biggest dreams, know another country with her. I think that my possibilities there, will be more than here in spain, that’s why i’m so excited. Life’s is bringing to me a second chance to do the things better, i’m so thankful.
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IELTS essay Why I want to live in Australia

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
176 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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