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The reasons why I would like to live in Australia

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There are a few reasons about why I would live in Australia, for example, the work. There are many job opportunities, and I think that it's a good reason to travel into Australia and start a new life. Another reason is the "new life", I mean, start a new life, in a new country, with new people, culture, lifestyle. . . In mu opinion, Australia is a better country than Spain, because the australian lifestyle is more quieter than the spanish lifestyle. For example, in Spain we have another way of doing things, more "rude". Another reason is the climate and nature. I love animals, and the idea of discover new and exotic animals I think it's very cool. In Australia I would like study too, specifically architecture. And the final reason but not the least, it's travel with my boyfriend. We always wanted to live together, and this opportunity will make out dream come true. Just imagine wake up every morning and see him makes me so happy.
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IELTS essay The reasons why I would like to live in Australia

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
169 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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