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Why adults in the UK attend art events

In UK people are attending arts events for various purpose but it seems that their reasons to attend such events are changing over time. It is interesting to note that, people are still interested to see their desired artist or the performance of the artist. However, the cause for going such events are increasing due to the recess of childrens. By contrast, attending the atrts in special occasion is gradually falling according to the report. Although, adults visiting such events for business purpose is rising. To summarise, the overall attendance looks pretty steady over time where the point of interest to attend events has been changed.

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events
 are changing over time.

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events
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events
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