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Which piece of technology would our life be better? Why?

Which piece of technology would our life be better? Why? wBBkq

With all of these events that we live in these times, the healthcare is an important theme in our society. But this has changed a lot during years because technology. What are the things necessary to evolve in this field? Firstly, some illness are incurable. But imagine that technology will create a chip with a cure for illness like cancer if you insert it inside you. Secondly, some surgeries that weren't impossible to do it a couple of decades ago, now they are possible because technology change this with the creation of items for this type of surgeries. Finally, machines are helpful when we need a quick response to develop things for humans in unbelievable record times. For example, a machine create for giving us the results of a lot of patients' antigens tests. To sum up, technology in this area has changed completely the meaning of the healthcare. But I believe that we can continue doing development in this area, to take care of our health, the most important in live.

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