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whether the private collection of fossils is a good idea or not

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Both the reading and the lecture discuss whether the private collection of fossils is a good idea or not. The former argues that this practice is disadvantageous for three reasons, but the lecture contradicts these points. First of all, the author contends that the public will not view the fossils if private collectors own all of them, thus decreasing interest in science. In contrast, the lecturer argues that public exposure to fossils will rise if private collectors purchase them. He stated that low-level institutions and schools will now have the ability to acquire fossils that they could not previously. Second, the writer asserts that scientists will lose access to fossils if private collectors acquire them. However, the professor refutes that scientists have to view the fossils before private collectors accurately value and catalog them. Thus, scientists will always be the people who have first access to the fossils. Finally, the essayist claims that private collectors are not trained scientists and thus damage the fossils when they uncover them. On the other hand, the listening counters that, while private collectors do some damage, this situation is preferable because if they didn't look for fossils, many would remain in the ground undiscovered. He further argues that it's better to have more fossils than let them stay in the environment.
Both the reading and the lecture discuss whether the private

collection of
fossils
is a
good
idea
or not. The former argues that

this practice is disadvantageous for three reasons,
but
the lecture

contradicts these points.

First of all
, the author contends that the public will not view the
fossils
if
private
collectors
own
all of them,
thus
decreasing

interest in science.
In contrast
, the lecturer argues that public

exposure to
fossils
will rise if
private
collectors
purchase
them. He stated that low-level institutions and schools

will
now
have the ability to acquire
fossils
that they could not

previously.

Second, the writer asserts that scientists will lose access to

fossils if
private
collectors acquire them.
However
,

the professor refutes that scientists
have to
view the fossils

before
private
collectors
accurately
value and

catalog them.
Thus
, scientists will always be the
people
who have

first
access to the fossils.

Finally
, the essayist claims that
private
collectors are not trained

scientists and
thus
damage the
fossils
when they

uncover them.
On the other hand
, the listening counters that, while

private collectors do
some
damage, this situation is

preferable
because
if they didn't look for
fossils
,
many
would remain in the ground undiscovered. He
further
argues that it's

better to have more
fossils
than
let
them stay in the environment.
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IELTS essay whether the private collection of fossils is a good idea or not

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
217 words
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