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In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many parts of the world, the usage of plastic containers is increasing at a very rapid pace. I believe it to be extremely beneficial not only in terms of economical production of goods but also in terms of expanding exports. This essay will explore how these two advantages have the potential to undermine any drawbacks. Firstly, the usage of malleable containers is highly economical for Beverages Company. In other words, plastic has less height and weight as compared to other packing materials. Hence, it also reduces final product cost. To cite an example, PEPSICO's recent survey revealed that with the usage of plastic bottles they safe their transport cost more than 20% because plastic bottles consumed less space. Thus, this huge benefit has the potential to outshine any flaw in the consumption of molded containers. Secondly, waxy containers also aid in providing final products to their customers in variant sizes and shapes. It is beneficial for the consumer to choose material as per their packaging requirement. Furthermore, these containers take less space due to this we are able to export our products easily to other countries. For instance, China commerce industry has proven that China expands their export to 10% due to usage of plastic packing. Hence, it has benefited local and international market both to easily transport their final products. However, the only minor drawback that I can relate to development is that. After usage, consumers throw away these containers, which later eaten by stray and wildlife animals, but this disadvantage is extremely rare and elusive and can be compensated. To illustrate, Coca-Cola urged their customers to return cans to shops, and eventually, the consumer will get some rewards. Hence, companies are conveying messages to their clients through different mediums to inform them regarding the proper handling of plastic. If we aware our consumer properly so, no one effecting through this cause. To sum up, it can be concluded that the benefits of consuming bendable material especially in terms of cost-saving and facilitating the export sector. It can easily overshadow the minor drawback related to the animals in which companies are making their customers self-aware regarding the handling of these plastics
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usage
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plastic
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containers
is increasing at a
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very
rapid pace. I believe it to be
extremely
beneficial not
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only
in terms of economical production of
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goods
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but
also
in terms of expanding
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exports
. This essay will explore how these two advantages have the potential to undermine any drawbacks.

Firstly
, the
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usage
of malleable
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containers
is
highly
economical for Beverages
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Company
.
In other words
,
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plastic
has less height and weight as compared to other packing materials.
Hence
, it
also
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reduces
final product cost. To cite an example,
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PEPSICO
's recent survey revealed that with the
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usage
of
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plastic
bottles they
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safe
their transport cost more than 20%
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because
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plastic
bottles consumed less space.
Thus
, this huge benefit has the potential to outshine any flaw in the consumption of molded containers.

Secondly
, waxy
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containers
also
aid in providing final products to their customers in variant sizes and shapes. It is beneficial for the
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consumer
to choose material as per their packaging requirement.
Furthermore
, these
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containers
take less space due to this we are able to
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export
our products
easily
to other countries.
For instance
, China commerce industry has proven that China expands their
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export
to 10% due to
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usage
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
packing.
Hence
, it has benefited local and international market both to
easily
transport their final products.

However
, the
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only
minor drawback that I can relate to development is that. After
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usage
,
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consumers
throw away these
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containers
, which later eaten by stray and wildlife animals,
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but
this disadvantage is
extremely
rare and elusive and can
be compensated
. To illustrate, Coca-Cola urged their customers to return cans to shops, and
eventually
, the
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consumer
will
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get
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some
rewards.
Hence
,
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companies
are conveying messages to their clients through
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different
mediums to inform them regarding the proper handling of
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plastic
. If
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we aware
our
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consumer
properly
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so
, no one effecting through this cause.

To sum up, it can
be concluded
that the benefits of consuming bendable material
especially
in terms of cost-saving and facilitating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
sector. It can
easily
overshadow the minor drawback related to the animals in which
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companies
are making their customers self-aware regarding the handling of these
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plastics
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IELTS essay In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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