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When children are growing up, it is a test for both children and their parents.

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When children are growing up, it is a test for both children and their parents. Sometime parents become too much ambitious, and as result they force their children, Sometime they don't give proper attention to the children. In this essay, i will discuss why parents force their children and what's parents responsibility towards their children's education. To begin with, parents wants better results of the children. This is because they want their childrens to be successful in their school, and furthermore in their life. For instance, if child is lacking in the studies, if parent force him/her to do hard work then child might get desirable outcome. If parent won't pressure the child to perform well then child might not reach his/her true potential in perteculer task, or in the school. If parents pressure their children, then they feel more oblige to do the work. Parents play very crucial role in children development. Parents are the first teachers of the children. Parents should support their children, and encourage them when sometime children not perform well in school, and even in regular day to day life. Parents should educate children for real life circumstances. For example if child does hard work in school exam, and does not get desirable result, some times child might get depressed. If parent would have taught child that beside giving 100%, sometime you not get what you want, and doing so child might not get depressed, and learn to tackle tough situations. After agglomerating above all ellucideted points, it can be reciprocated that parents should be strict sometime and sometime be generous and encourage children.
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are growing up, it is a
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for both
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and their
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.
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parents
become too much ambitious, and as result they force their
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children
,
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Sometime
they don't give proper attention to the
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children
. In this essay,
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will discuss why
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parents
force their
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children
and what's
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parents
responsibility towards their children's education.

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begin
with,
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wants better results of the
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children
. This is
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they want their
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to be successful in their
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school
, and
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in their life.
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, if
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child
is lacking in the studies, if
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parent
force him/her to do
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hard
work then
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child
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get
desirable outcome. If
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won't pressure the
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to perform well then
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child
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might
not reach his/her true potential in
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perteculer
task, or in the
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school
. If
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parents
pressure their
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, then they feel more oblige to do the work.

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crucial role in
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development.
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are the
first
teachers of the
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.
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should support their
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children
, and encourage them when
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sometime
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children
not perform well in
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school
, and even in regular
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day to day
life.
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should educate
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children
for real life circumstances.
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if
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does
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exam, and does not
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depressed. If
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that beside giving
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you not
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what you want, and doing
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so
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child
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not
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depressed, and learn to tackle tough situations.

After agglomerating
above all
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ellucideted
points, it can
be reciprocated
that
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parents
should be strict
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sometime
and
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sometime
be generous and encourage
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children
.
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IELTS essay When children are growing up, it is a test for both children and their parents.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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