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What sort of water are you advised to use? 6. What factor makes you decide on the quantity of steam to use? 7. What should you do if your iron starts to drip water? 8. What could damage your iron

What sort of water are you advised to use? 6. What factor makes you decide on the quantity of steam to use? 7. What should you do if your iron starts to drip water? 8. What could damage your iron 857VV
We ask you to keep luggage down to one medium-sized suitcase per person, but a small holdall can also be taken on board the coach. Seat Allocation Requests for particular seats can be made on most coach breaks when booking, but since allocations are made on a first come first served basis, early booking is advisable. When bookings are made with us you will be offered the best seats that are available on the coach at that time.
We ask you to
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keep
luggage down to one medium-sized suitcase per person,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
holdall can
also
be taken
on board the coach.

Seat Allocation

Requests for particular seats can
be made
on most coach breaks when booking,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
since allocations
are made
on a
first
It seems that a comma is missing.
come
first
served basis, early booking is advisable.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
bookings
are made
with us you will
be offered
the best seats that are available on the coach at that time.
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IELTS essay What sort of water are you advised to use? 6. What factor makes you decide on the quantity of steam to use? 7. What should you do if your iron starts to drip water? 8. What could damage your iron

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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