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What is the negative and positive impact of the social media

What is the negative and positive impact of the social media yXL6r
Nowadays, social media plays a very important role in our lives. We can see and find it every where around us. . In my opinion, there are many advantages for using the social media platforms as there are many negative impacts. Firstly, if we look to the communication aspect. we can say that by using the social media we make a good relationships and easy way to connect. Also we shouldn't forget that we can follow the news of the world by using social media programs just in one click.
Nowadays,
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role in our
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In my opinion, there are
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advantages for using the
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platforms as there are
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, if we look to the communication aspect.
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can say that by using the
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we
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make
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relationships and easy way to connect.

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Also
we shouldn't forget that we can follow the news of the world by using
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IELTS essay What is the negative and positive impact of the social media

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
90 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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