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What do you like to read in your free time For example magazine newspaper or book

What do you like to read in your free time For example magazine newspaper or book kYEdn
Nowadays, people around the world are in constant struggle with themselves trying to choose between reading a book, magazine, newspaper or academic papers. In my opinion, I definitely prefer to read books. However, it is a difficult decision especially because the short time that the younger people have, the university or the work requires us to read specialized readings such as academic papers and research even in our free time. Even though this topic is called into question, I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in the following essay. First and foremost, the well-known phrase “a book is the best friend of men” is really true. Since we are children, our parents give us different books with the main main to increase our imagination, travel to other worlds through the lecture. No matter the topic of the books, because on the market we can found several options from science fiction to historical books. In my case, I really like biographic books. Nowadays, I am reading a book called “Becoming” from the former First Lady, Michelle Obama. This is a precious gift that my boyfriend give me on the last Christmas, and this book is utmost inspirational for me, especially because Mrs. Obama is one of the women that I admire all over the world. Another important reason is that by reading books we definitely could increase our knowledge, and we will be able to be better professionals and students. On top of that, specialists in the field show through empiric evidence that people who are continually reading could improve the use of their brain in 5 percent. This kind of results helps us to be consequent with our motivation to read. In sum, I love to read books, and I will continue reading because it helps me to be better and it is enough for me. Lastly, would recommend that governments could increase their budget on education and promote more policies and programs in order to children could enjoy with the lecture.
Nowadays,
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people
around the world are in constant struggle with themselves trying to choose between
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reading
a
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book
, magazine, newspaper or academic papers. In my opinion, I definitely prefer to read
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books
.
However
, it is a difficult decision
especially
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because
the short time that the younger
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people
have, the university or the work requires us to read specialized
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readings
such as academic papers and research even in our free time.
Even though
this topic
is called
into question, I feel this way for two main reasons which I will
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explain
in the following essay.

First
and foremost, the well-known phrase “a
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book
is the best friend of
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men
” is
really
true. Since we are children, our parents give us
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different
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books
with the
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main main
to increase our imagination, travel to other worlds through the lecture. No matter the topic of the
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books
,
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because
on the market we can
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found
several options from science fiction to historical
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books
. In my case, I
really
like biographic
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books
. Nowadays, I am
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reading
a
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book
called “Becoming” from the former
First
Lady, Michelle Obama. This is a precious gift that my boyfriend give me on the last Christmas, and this
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book
is utmost inspirational for me,
especially
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because
Mrs. Obama is one of the women that I admire all over the world.

Another
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important
reason is that by
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reading
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books
we definitely could increase our knowledge, and we will be able to be better professionals and students.
On top of that
, specialists in the field
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show
through empiric evidence that
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people
who are
continually
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reading
could
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improve
the
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use
of their brain in 5 percent. This kind of results
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helps
us to be consequent with our motivation to read.

In sum, I
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love
to read
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books
, and I will continue
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reading
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because
it
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helps
me to be better and it is
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enough
for me.
Lastly
, would recommend that
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governments
could increase their budget on education and promote more policies and programs in order to children could enjoy with the lecture.
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IELTS essay What do you like to read in your free time For example magazine newspaper or book

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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