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Natural charming locations are slowly destroyed by population growth and ever-developing city centres. As a result, major problems occur such as air pollution, noise pollution, etc. but this can be tackled by protecting nature as much as possible and building parks. The main problem faced by many countries due to the population growth and ever-growing urban areas is that they start to lose slowly their natural habitats by constructing new buildings. If a city lets in national or international immigrants, they have more inhabitants. So, they have to build new accommodation zones for them and start to ruin places that have beautiful landscapes. In addition to that, they need to construct health facilities, police and fire departments, roads, etc. to provide a better living for their population. Consequently, developing cities lose their green areas and this situation can easily lead to environmental issues. One of the solutions to protect the natural beauty in the cities is that they need to protect as much as possible the spots that have beautiful nature by building eco-friendly houses. Also, they should declare some areas as the national park for people who can enjoy nature. In this way, they do not have to cut trees and can provide less polluted areas. Another solution for this environmental problem is that they should build more parks in urban areas. For example, New York City has one of the biggest park named Central Park in the USA. This park provides habitats and oxygen for animals, people and other living creatures. So, it is like an oasis in the city. In conclusion, many countries face some environmental problems while they are growing such as losing their green lands and habitats. Authorities should pay attention to these problems by protecting nature as much as possible while developing, and building parks in order to ensure livable cities for the people.
Natural charming locations are
slowly
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destroyed
by population growth and ever-developing city
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centres
.
As a result
, major
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problems
occur such as air pollution, noise pollution, etc.
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but
this can
be tackled
by protecting
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nature
as much as possible and
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building
parks.

The main
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problem
faced by
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many
countries due to the population growth and ever-growing urban
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areas
is that they
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start
to lose
slowly
their natural habitats by constructing new
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buildings
. If a city
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lets
in national or international immigrants, they have more inhabitants.
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So
, they
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have to
build new accommodation zones for them and
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start
to ruin places that have
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beautiful
landscapes.
In addition
to that, they need to construct health facilities, police and fire departments, roads, etc. to provide a better living for their population.
Consequently
, developing
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cities
lose their green
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areas
and this situation can
easily
lead to environmental issues.

One of the solutions to protect the natural beauty in the
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cities
is that they need to protect as much as possible the spots that have
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beautiful
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nature
by
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building
eco-friendly
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houses
.
Also
, they should declare
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some
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areas
as the national
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park
for
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people
who can enjoy
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nature
. In this way, they do not
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have to
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cut
trees and can provide less polluted
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areas
. Another solution for this environmental
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problem
is that they should build more
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parks
in urban
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areas
.
For example
, New York City has one of the biggest
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park
named Central
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Park
in the USA. This
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park
provides habitats and oxygen for animals,
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people
and other living creatures.
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So
, it is like an oasis in the city.

In conclusion
,
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many
countries face
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some
environmental
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problems
while they are growing such as losing their green lands and habitats. Authorities should pay attention to these
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problems
by protecting
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nature
as much as possible while developing, and
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building
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parks
in order to ensure livable
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cities
for the
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people
.
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IELTS essay what benefits are there to protecting nature

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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