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What benefits are there to protect places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

What benefits are there to protect places of natural beauty? How can this be solved? awxOw
Due to the considerable increase of populations and the dramatic appearance of cosmopolitan areas, many beautiful landscapes in different countries have been destroyed largely. By protecting these places, many economic and environmental benefits can be realized. Therefore, governments and individuals should take steps to protect them at all costs. This essay will discuss the advantages of keeping natural beauty spots intact, followed by some plausible solutions to protect these places. Economy and environment of a country can be benefited a great deal thanks for places of natural beauty. First, they can bring out massive profits from attracting a great number of tourists each year, which helps to enhance not only the national economy but also citizens' living standards. Second, natural places are usually habitats of different species, including endangered ones. If humans blindly sacrifice them for building city centers or residential areas, they will pay a heavy price both economically and environmentally. Therefore, it is of vital importance to preserve these places for the safety of wild animals and plants. Different measures are put forwards by many environmentalists, which are worth our serious considerations. First, governments could introduce laws which impose severe punishments on any individuals or organizations that intend to construct buildings illegally in natural landscapes. In this way, it will deter those who deliberately take advantage of these places for their own benefits, which can have a devastating effect on the environment of any countries. In addition, each citizen should also pay close attention to natural places in their nation to immediately report illegal behaviors or at least voice their opinion of inappropriate plans of their governments towards the places, creating a large enough public pressure to stop any harmful moves. In conclusion, because of considerable merits of natural beauty spots in connection with the environment and economy of a nation, governments and individuals should make every efforts to the preservation of these places.
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beautiful
landscapes in
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different
countries have been
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destroyed
largely
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places
,
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many
economic and environmental benefits can
be realized
.
Therefore
,
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governments
and individuals should take steps to protect them at all costs. This essay will discuss the advantages of keeping
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natural
beauty spots intact, followed by
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some
plausible solutions to protect these places.

Economy and environment of a country can
be benefited
a great deal thanks for
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places
of
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natural
beauty.
First
, they can bring out massive profits from attracting a great number of tourists each year, which
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helps
to enhance not
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only
the national economy
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but
also
citizens' living standards. Second,
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natural
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places
are
usually
habitats of
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different
species, including endangered ones. If humans
blindly
sacrifice them for building city centers or residential areas, they will pay a heavy price both
economically
and
environmentally
.
Therefore
, it is of vital importance to preserve these
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places
for the safety of wild animals and plants.

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Different
measures
are put
forwards by
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many
environmentalists, which are worth our serious considerations.
First
,
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governments
could introduce laws which impose severe punishments on any individuals or organizations that intend to construct buildings
illegally
in
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natural
landscapes. In this way, it will deter those who
deliberately
take advantage of these
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places
for their
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own
benefits, which can have a devastating effect on the environment of any countries.
In addition
, each citizen should
also
pay close attention to
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natural
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places
in their nation to immediately report illegal behaviors or at least voice their opinion of inappropriate plans of their
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governments
towards the
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places
, creating a large
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enough
public pressure to
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stop
any harmful
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moves
.

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In
conclusion,
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because
of considerable merits of
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natural
beauty spots in connection with the environment and economy of a nation,
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governments
and individuals should
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make
every
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efforts
to the preservation of these
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places
.
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IELTS essay What benefits are there to protect places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
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