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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income.

University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. OVQ33
Nowadays, there are heated debates about free education. Some people say that university education should be free though income. As far as I concerned this state bring a lot of benefit to society and people. I totally agree with this statement and I will support my point of view with some reasons and examples in the following paragraphs. Initially, if all education systems in university are free, this state is very comfortably for all students and their families. As an instance, all families do not spend extra money in order to learn of their children and they may spend this money in order to family requirement. This example clearly shows all families satisfy this state, if university education would be free. Therefore, it is supported that government should organize free education in university. Secondly, as we have to talk about coming income to government that there are different type of families and many families has been lived in difficult family state and they cannot pay study of children. This example makes it clear that many children don’t learn and they do anything job though good or bad in order to find money. This statement clearly shows the illiteracy rate rise and other problems appear by find money in the county. It is obvious that if government want to multiple problems in society and want decreasing illiteracy, they should shape free education in all university. As an conclusion, after considering both negative and positive sides of free chargeable education of university. I once more firmly believe that free education system is always useful and comfortably for people and government. Therefore, it is recommended that this process should constituent in all counties and university.
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should be
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though income. As far as I concerned this
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some
reasons and examples in the following paragraphs.

Initially
, if all
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education
systems in
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are
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free
, this
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comfortably
for all students and their
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families
. As an instance, all
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do not spend extra
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money
in order to learn of their
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children and
they may spend this
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money
in order to
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requirement. This example
clearly
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all
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satisfy this
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would be
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in university.

Secondly
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that there are
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has been
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in difficult
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state and
they cannot pay study of children. This example
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it
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learn and
they do anything job though
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or
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in order to find
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money
. This statement
clearly
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the illiteracy rate rise and other problems appear by find
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money
in the county. It is obvious that if
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government
want to multiple problems in society and want decreasing illiteracy, they should shape
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free
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education
in all university.

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an
conclusion, after considering both
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and
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sides of
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chargeable
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of
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. I once more
firmly
believe that
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free
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system is always useful and
comfortably
for
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people
and
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government
.
Therefore
, it
is recommended
that this process should constituent in all counties and
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university
.
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IELTS essay University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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