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In the modern world it is possible to shop and communicate with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with other it is a positive or nagtive development

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: One of the most one of the most consideration trend of
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today
's world is share
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upsosb
. The number of
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people
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believe
that the
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use
of
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use
of interest
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in the internet
has wild spread of
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many
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problems
as for as my perception is concert internet has a
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lot
of benefit
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add
a
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lot
of a Dark Side

[3/28, 4: 38 PM]
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Jass
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Panju
: To comments with there are multi various argument behind this performance of the
first
and foremost argument is
that is
the largest number of
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people
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used
as
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use
internet and face
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Mein
a
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lot
of
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problems
regarding health like weakness I said discretion and
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so
on to be more
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clear
,
for example
during the
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covid-19
to that
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time
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people
could not go outside
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people
fully
at home on this that
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time
there are two
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people
spend most
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time
of their homes internet are player
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lot
of games on the on their
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Shivay
on the
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people
face a
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lot
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problems
such as
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contribu
color blindness and
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so
on

[3/28, 4: 41 PM]
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Panju
: inspiration observations suggest that gained a
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lot
of benefit to the internet with the
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help
of internet
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people
can
easily
convert to communicate with each every one person in this the other hand nowadays
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people
are
however
, they are there have a nap
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to go outside for their on their
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time
of
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people
by each and
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everyone
online apps such as an Amazon gift card and
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so
on

[3/28, 4: 42 PM]
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:
to conclude
the internet has a
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lot
of benefit and a
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lot
of a
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lot
of that was
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because
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people
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use
a
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lot
of a social media and face a
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lot
of
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problems
like side and
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so
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IELTS essay In the modern world it is possible to shop and communicate with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with other it is a positive or nagtive development

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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