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Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. KOWL
Parenting is one of debatable topics in today's world. Up-bringing of any individual is in the hand of the parents. Although people are influenced by many relationships, parents have greater impacts in their lives. Teaching about parenting in very young age is necessary provide that it helps to be prepared on beforehand. There are various skills required for good parent like empathy, decision making etc. At first, Educating and providing knowledge on parenting to younger kids would help them become more mature adults. This education can also help the children to bring changes in parent's lives with positive impact. Even though many people argue that children would acquire knowledge only the basis of their age group. I would disagree with those people, As I believe it is required to break this stigma at younger age by providing education. In this modern world, children tend to learn things faster than the previous generations. There are also studies that prove they are more intelligent! To become a good parent any individual must have a conducive childhood, or He must be aware to cope up with life despite of any difficulties. I reckon that the following skills helps in better parenting. Empathy would stand first in list, As it is necessary for the parent to know their children wants and desires. Decision making helps the parent to make feisty decisions in their child's life right. Acceptance is also a key skill since parents must accept their children without any hesitation. As conclusion, I strongly agree that students can be taught about the ways to become good parent as it will increase the knowledge of any individual and try to avoid the mistakes or cope-up with the life. Good parenting requires a list of skills but it also requires good mindset and a heart!
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today
's world. Up-bringing of any individual is in the hand of the
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parents
. Although
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people
are influenced
by
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many
relationships,
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parents
have greater impacts in their
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lives
. Teaching about
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parenting
in
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very
young age is necessary provide that it
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helps
to
be prepared
on beforehand. There are various
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skills
required for
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good
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parent
like empathy,
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decision making
etc.

At
first
, Educating and providing knowledge on
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parenting
to younger kids would
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help
them become more mature adults. This education can
also
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help
the
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children
to bring
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changes
in parent's
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lives
with
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positive
impact.
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would acquire knowledge
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the basis of their age group. I would disagree with those
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people
, As I believe it
is required
to break this stigma at younger age by providing education. In this modern world,
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children
tend to learn things faster than the previous generations. There are
also
studies that prove they are more intelligent!

To become a
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good
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parent
any individual
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must
have a conducive childhood, or He
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must
be aware to cope up with life
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despite of
any difficulties. I reckon that the following
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skills
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helps
in better
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parenting
. Empathy would stand
first
in list, As it is necessary for the
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parent
to know their
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children
wants and desires.
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Decision making
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helps
the
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to
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make
feisty decisions in their child's life right. Acceptance is
also
a key
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skill
since
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parents
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must
accept their
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children
without any hesitation.

As conclusion, I
strongly
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agree
that students can
be taught
about the ways to become
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good
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parent
as it will increase the knowledge of any individual and try to avoid the mistakes or cope-up with the life.
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Good
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parenting
requires a list of
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skills
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it
also
requires
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good
mindset and a heart!
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IELTS essay : Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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