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We live in an age when many of us use technological devices in every sphere of life, and it affects our communication skills in various forms. It seems to me that communication technology has more positive effects on relationship than negative ones, and I will explain why in this essay. To start with, since technology-based communication has unveiled, daily life of people simplified and communication among them became easier. They contact with their family and friends regardless of distance. In addition, telecommunication also assist to contact in business sphere, which makes convenient condition for employees. For instance, workers use email to inform of others in a labour-saving way or use meeting features to organize online meeting with colleagues who live in abroad. Secondly, due to enhancing of telecommunication technology people can make a friendship from various nationality without visiting anywhere. It helps to exchange cultures, so that people improve their general knowlegde

We live in an age when many of us use technological devices in every sphere of life, and it affects our communication skills in various forms. It seems to me that communication technology has more positive effects on relationship than negative ones, and I will explain why in this essay. To start with, since technology-based communication has unveiled, daily life of people simplified and communication among them became easier. They contact with their family and friends regardless of distance. In addition, telecommunication also assist to contact in business sphere, which makes convenient condition for employees. For instance, workers use email to inform of others in a labour-saving way or use meeting features to organize online meeting with colleagues who live in abroad. Secondly, due to enhancing of telecommunication technology people can make a friendship from various nationality without visiting anywhere. It helps to exchange cultures, so that people improve their general knowlegde and can tolerate every nation's traditions. Furthermore, making friendship with foreigner may supports people to acquire up-to-date opinions from business to politics and unite several people for one purpose. In fact, nowadays, a variety of people gather for a demand, such as women's rights, the rights of a labor, animal rights or environment, and support each other not only in social network, but also organizing a march and making a virtual petition. To sum up, although some people allege negative effects of telecommunication, due to the fact that communication technology supports to contact easily, exchange culture and knowledge it is indispensable for modern society.

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