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Water resources management strategies in China

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This is used in locations in which waters flow in particular areas along a body of water. This has been an ongoing and long time strategy that focuses on comprehensive erosion control measures such as hill slope and gully stabilization reorganizing farm lands and regulating the river system. The soft-path approach aspires to significantly improve water productivity and provide water services that are tailored to the needs of individual consumers. This is done by monitoring the water pricing, rights, along with the management of the rising water demands. For instance, we could mention the National Water Rights Exchange platform, this is a market based mechanism that aids in efficient use of the products which in this case would be the water resources. Every month, for every user a certain amount of water would be given, they could either use this as a whole or sell a portion of the amount they have conserved to those who require more than the limit. However, this is only applicable to users who are under the same watershed. Additionally, the taxes of water resources differ based on the localities, total amount used, specific uses and water supply source (surface or groundwater). With the application of circularity, societal growth and preservation of the harmony between human and nature, the ecological civilization consolidates these to reach the superior development of the country in the coming years along. This is done through technological advancements, application of environmentalism and enforcement of laws such as the “Water Prevention Act of 2008”. With 80% of China’s water resources being located in Southern China. We could find an uneven distribution, as insufficiency of this resource can be located in the Northerly part of China. The South- North water Transfer Projects aims to transfer an approximate 45 billion cubic meters of water from one to another in hopes to resolve this uneven dispersal. The rate of water demand is high due to the scarcity and the fall of water quality due to its contamination or excessive pollution. Nevertheless, the expanding industries, continual development and over population has added an extreme amount of pressure to its demand.
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used
in locations in which
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waters
flow
in particular
areas along a body of
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water
. This has been an ongoing and long time strategy that focuses on comprehensive erosion control measures such as hill slope and gully stabilization reorganizing farm lands and regulating the river system.

The soft-path approach aspires to
significantly
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improve
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water
productivity and provide
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water
services that
are tailored
to the needs of individual consumers. This
is done
by monitoring the
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water
pricing, rights, along with the management of the rising
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water
demands.
For instance
, we could mention the National
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Water
Rights Exchange platform, this is a market based mechanism that aids in efficient
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use
of the products which
in this case
would be the
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water
resources. Every month, for every user a certain
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amount
of
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water
would be
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given
, they could either
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use
this as a whole or sell a portion of the
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amount
they have conserved to those who require more than the limit.
However
, this is
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only
applicable to users who are under the same watershed.
Additionally
, the taxes of
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water
resources differ based on the localities, total
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amount
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used
, specific
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uses
and
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water
supply source (surface or groundwater).

With the application of circularity, societal growth and preservation of the harmony between human and nature, the ecological civilization consolidates these to reach the superior development of the country in the coming years along. This
is done
through technological advancements, application of environmentalism and enforcement of laws such as the
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“Water
Prevention Act of 2008”.

With 80% of China’s
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water
resources
being located
in Southern China. We could find an uneven distribution, as insufficiency of this
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resource
can
be located
in the
Northerly
part of China. The South- North
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water
Transfer Projects aims to transfer an approximate 45 billion cubic meters of
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water
from one to another in hopes to resolve this uneven dispersal. The rate of
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water
demand is high due to the scarcity and the fall of
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water
quality due to its contamination or excessive pollution.
Nevertheless
, the expanding industries, continual development and over population has
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added
an extreme
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amount
of pressure to its demand.
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IELTS essay Water resources management strategies in China

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
354 words
6.0
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