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The Education of society.

The Education of society. brl33
Education is the social institution through which society provides its members with important knowledge, including basic facts, job skills, and cultural norms values. Education helps people become better citizens and get a better job. Education shows us the importance of hard work and at the same time helps us grow and develop. Thus, we can form a better society to live in by knowing and respecting rights, laws and regulations. Social care can also develop from education services by providing schools with technologic and modern tools.
Education
is the social institution through which society provides its members with
important
knowledge, including basic facts, job
skills
, and cultural norms values.
Education
helps
people
become better citizens and
get
a better job.
Education
shows
us the importance of
hard
work and at the same time
helps
us grow and develop.
Thus
, we can form a better society to
live
in by knowing and respecting rights, laws and regulations. Social care can
also
develop from
education
services by
providing


schools
with
technologic
and modern tools.
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IELTS essay The Education of society.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
86 words
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