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The only way to protect the environment and guarantee environmental sustainability during development is for governments to change environmental laws. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.

The only way to protect the environment and guarantee environmental sustainability during development is for governments to change environmental laws. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. PE9L2
Global warming, plastic pollution, gas emission, etc. . . have always been a point of interest for a wide range of governments nowadays especially in the current developmental phase. Simultaneously, laws and regulations issued by the ministries should be considered plentiful for maintaining environmental sustainability. First, I believe that laws and regulations are imposed to organize human behaviors. For instance, when someone breaks the rule by using plastic bottles and not sorting the waste properly for recycling will be penalized since he is contributing in increasing environmental pollution. However, at some point, the economic benefits from the industrial development and the sustainability of the nature are considered having conflicts of interest. For example, factories that encourage a number of industries such as consumables, furniture and other contributing to the economic growth are as well increasing the environmental contamination due to gas emission and global warming. Therefore, the policies issued regarding this point are limited and having several constraints. Worth mentioning as well that the decisions issued released among regulators might differ in terms of severity and application. In addition, regimen’s actions might not be enough by itself since each individual should have a sense of responsibility and awareness that his misbehavior might contribute to worsen the situation. For example, leaving the waste after a day of picnic and not controlling the use of polluters. Finally, I am convinced that the collaboration between the government that issued the legislations and each individual' perception and belief to respect these rules and contribute applying and improving them contributing to a healthier territory.
Global warming, plastic pollution, gas emission, etc.
.
.
have
always been a point of interest for a wide range of
governments
nowadays
especially
in the
current
developmental phase.
Simultaneously
, laws and regulations
issued
by the ministries should
be considered
plentiful for maintaining environmental sustainability.

First
, I believe that laws and regulations
are imposed
to organize human behaviors.
For instance
, when someone breaks the
rule
by using plastic bottles and not sorting the waste
properly
for recycling will
be penalized
since he is contributing in increasing environmental pollution.

However
, at
some
point, the economic benefits from the industrial development and the sustainability of the nature
are considered
having conflicts of interest.
For example
, factories that encourage a number of industries such as consumables, furniture and other contributing to the economic growth are
as well
increasing the environmental contamination due to gas emission and global warming.
Therefore
, the policies
issued
regarding this point
are limited
and having several constraints. Worth mentioning
as well
that the decisions
issued
released among regulators might differ in terms of severity and application.

In addition
, regimen’s actions might not be
enough
by itself since each individual should have a sense of responsibility and awareness that his misbehavior might contribute to worsen the situation.
For example
, leaving the waste after a day of picnic and not controlling the
use
of polluters.

Finally
, I
am convinced
that the collaboration between the
government
that
issued
the
legislations
and each individual' perception and belief to respect these
rules
and contribute applying and improving them contributing to a healthier territory.
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IELTS essay The only way to protect the environment and guarantee environmental sustainability during development is for governments to change environmental laws. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.

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