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Walt Kowalski Gran Torino

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In the following, the scene in which Walt Kowalski is shot is analysed in more detail. The scene begins with a large shot of the house. Walt Kowalski enters the picture and presents himself in front of the camera. After that, the camera zoom’s on the house. The door opens a few times and the gang members come out. The camera swings back and forth between the gang members at Walt Kowalski. This shows that Walt is outnumbered. One of the Hmong gang insults Tao. Walt protects him and tells them not to worry about it. He then get out a cigarette and forms a gun with his hand. He’s targeting every member. The camera follows his hand. After that he puts his cigarette in his mouth. Then he says he has light. The camera is filming the upper part of his body. He stretches his hand upwards so that it is also filmed. The camera films his hand again. This time, the camera gets even closer to his torso, so you can’t even see his face. He reaches into his pocket and get out his lighter very quickly. But you can’t see what he’s hiding in his hand. Immediately the mong mebers start shooting at him because they thought he would pull a gun. After Walt has fallen in slow motion to the earth, you can see the lighter in his hand. Walt knew the Hmong Gang would react like that. He wanted her to go to prison because that was the only way out for Tao and his family. Walt didn’t want to hurt them any more. His reaction is very astonishing as he sacrificed his own life. At first, he didn’t like the Hmong family. He insulted her. Over time, however, he liked her more and more. He even helped Tao get a job. Walt didn’t have a good relationship with his sons. Unlike the Hmong family, the bad relationship didn’t change throughout the movie. The movie ends with an astonishing ending. The viewer is closely involved and captivated by the different camera settings. The story also comes to an unexpected end.
In the following, the scene in which Walt Kowalski
is shot
is
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analysed
in more detail. The scene
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begins
with a large shot of the
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house
. Walt Kowalski enters the picture and presents himself in front of the
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camera
. After that, the
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camera
zoom’s on the
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house
. The door opens a few times and the
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gang
members
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come
out. The
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camera
swings back and forth between the
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gang
members at Walt Kowalski. This
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shows
that Walt
is outnumbered
. One of the Hmong
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gang
insults Tao. Walt protects him and
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tells
them not to worry about it. He then
The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gets", "got".
get
out a cigarette and forms a gun with his
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hand
.
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He’s
targeting every member. The
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camera
follows his
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hand
.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that he puts his cigarette in his mouth. Then he says he has light. The
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camera
is filming the upper part of his body. He stretches his
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hand
upwards
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so
that it is
also
filmed. The
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camera
films his
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hand
again. This time, the
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camera
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gets
even closer to his torso,
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so
you can’t even
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see
his face. He reaches into his pocket and
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get
out his lighter
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very
quickly
.
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But
you can’t
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see
what
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he’s
hiding in his
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hand
. Immediately the
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mong
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mebers
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start
shooting at him
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because
they
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thought
he would pull a gun. After Walt has fallen in slow motion to the earth, you can
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see
the lighter in his
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hand
. Walt knew the Hmong
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Gang
would react like that. He wanted her to go to prison
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because
that was the
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only
way out for Tao and his family. Walt didn’t want to hurt them
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any more
. His reaction is
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very
astonishing as he sacrificed his
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own
life. At
first
, he didn’t like the Hmong family. He insulted her. Over time,
however
, he liked her more and more. He even
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helped
Tao
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get
a job. Walt didn’t have a
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good
relationship with his sons. Unlike the Hmong family, the
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bad
relationship didn’t
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change
throughout the movie. The movie ends with an astonishing ending. The viewer is
closely
involved and captivated by the
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different
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camera
settings.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
story
also
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comes
to an unexpected
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end
.
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IELTS essay Walt Kowalski Gran Torino

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
355 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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