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What do you think about charity

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The charity is the giving of help, typically in the form of money, to those in need and provides practical help for homeless people. Volunteering is not just assist to entire world, also volunteering ensure with good personal characteristics as well as teamwork, leadership, problem solving, planning, time management and etcetera. As i am teenager who wants strong mental health, develop my skills and own good characteristics the charity for me is the best thing for get them. In addition, charity counts as one of keys of success. That means, be volunteer helps to be successful in the future. In conclusion, for myself the voluntary is an opportunity to turn your weak mental state into a strong one.
The charity is the giving of
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help
,
typically
in the form of money, to those in need and provides practical
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help
for homeless
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people
. Volunteering is not
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just
assist to entire world,
also
volunteering ensure with
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good
personal characteristics
as well
as teamwork, leadership, problem solving, planning, time management and etcetera. As
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i
am
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teenager
who wants strong mental health, develop my
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skills
and
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own
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good
characteristics the charity for me is the best thing for
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get
them.
In addition
, charity counts as one of keys of success. That means, be volunteer
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helps
to be successful in the future.
In conclusion
, for myself the voluntary is an opportunity to turn your weak mental state into a strong one.
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IELTS essay What do you think about charity

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  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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