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Vaccine for COVID-19 pandemic

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Many countries all over the world, right now, are facing the COVID-19 pandemic. The best solution to deal with the COVID-19 pandemic right now is that everyone should be vaccinated. Now, the only question is that the best vaccine is the high efficiency one or the one that you are offered? This essay agrees with the statement supporting that the best vaccine is the first one that is offered. Not only that getting vaccinated as fast as you can help increase your immune system, but it comes with varies of benefits as well.
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countries all over the world, right
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now
, are facing the COVID-19 pandemic. The best solution to deal with the COVID-19 pandemic right
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now
is that everyone should
be vaccinated
.
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Now
, the
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only
question is that the best vaccine is the high efficiency one or the one that you
are offered
?

This essay
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agrees
with the statement supporting that the best vaccine is the
first
one that
is offered
. Not
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only
that getting vaccinated as
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fast
as you can
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help
increase your immune system,
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with varies of benefits
as well
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IELTS essay Vaccine for COVID-19 pandemic

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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