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Using the concepts of trade, demand, supply, and market explains why the price of food has increased so much in Ho Chi Minh City during the social distancing lockdown. What did you learn from the lockdown time?

Using the concepts of trade, demand, supply, and market explains why the price of food has increased so much in Ho Chi Minh City during the social distancing lockdown. What did you learn from the lockdown time? QR3pb
As the city executes Prime Minister's Directive No. 16/CT-TTg on social distance, individuals restrict going out, increasing the need to store up and consume necessities like food. In Ho Chi Minh city, food costs at this extreme period are too high, contrary to the rule demand, which states that when the price goes up, the demand will fall. There are a few objective causes for this, such as transportation expenses, labor salaries, and other increasing costs, among others, and there are also subjective factors, such as a rise in retail prices of certain persons or organizations who are motivated only by profit. During the social distancing lockdown, each transaction gets more complicated, particularly when products are transported. Increased expenses for items are also a result of increased transportation, labor, and driver costs, as well as damaged goods and other losses as a result of extended rotation. For example, all drivers who travel through the quarantine station must have a COVID-19 test certificate, yet medical units only provide testing for those who have been isolated, not testing services. Additionally, the testing capacity of the epidemic-affected locations has been inadequate and insufficiently responsive. The validity time of the test card is not explicitly stated in the test results. A lot of firms and drivers have been forced to curtail or stop their activities as a result. As a result, most drivers and escorts have not been vaccinated, as the vaccine supply is very restricted. This produces worry since it takes time to conduct tests, costs money to conduct tests, concerns about becoming infected, costs testing, moving in and out of epidemic regions must be confined for 21 days, and does not want to engage in the movement of products. Local driving and car shortages result from this. Deterioration of the quality and quantity of agricultural goods occurs since they must pass through multiple checkpoints during transportation for consumption, despite having comprehensive documentation on epidemic prevention and management. Thus, the rise in the price of products is a result of the cost of making COVID-19 tests, shipping expenses, labor costs, drivers, damaged goods, and the loss of fresh items owing to the extended circulation period. When the epidemic situation is severe, buyers are willing to queue for hours in front of food stalls such as supermarkets, mini-supermarkets, convenience stores, markets, and groceries. Regardless of the price of the food item, buyers are determined to come in and purchase food stored in the family and to limit their outings. Nonetheless, when purchasers approach the food market, they are faced with a lack of alternatives or possibly nothing to purchase. This indicates that consumer demand for food has increased across all markets, which could result in supply shortages in certain areas. Additionally, several major and small businesses, such as wholesale marketplaces or grocery shops, were compelled to leave the market due to the complexity of their supply chains, making it impossible for the state to control and determine the source of the sickness. While demand for food is growing, supply is constrained, indicating a severe food scarcity in areas where the pandemic is complex, like Vietnam's Ho Chi Minh City. Other organizations have profited from this inelastic demand phenomenon by boosting the prices of their food by 2-3 times the market price in order to earn a profit and raise their total revenue. Similarly, some people purchase price-stabilizing foods in extremely large amounts from supermarkets to resell them at a profit. In general, the considerable rise in transportation costs and expenditures incurred during transit is the objective explanation for the period's high food prices; nevertheless, subjective factors also exist such as profitability and revenue growth for a variety of big and small businesses. The good news is that Saigon Co. op is one of the leading large enterprises that are under a great deal of pressure from costs incurred in transportation, testing, and personnel difficulties, but Saigon Co. op has refused to raise the price of products in order to share the spending pressure with the people. Through the COVID-19 epidemic, in the future, as a seller, I have learned to share spending pressure with consumers to build sustainability between sellers and buyers. Furthermore, the application of technological technology in commerce, such as spending and revenue management software, can simply control as well as save a lot of money and restrict the cost of products increases. As a businesswoman, I must maintain my reputation, be honest, offer high-quality items, and avoid selling counterfeit goods that endanger clients' health.
As the city executes Prime Minister's Directive No. 16/
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on social distance, individuals restrict going out, increasing the need to store up and consume necessities like
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Ho Chi Minh city
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food
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costs
at this extreme period are too high, contrary to the
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rule
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demand
, which states that when the
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price
goes up, the
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demand
will fall. There are a few objective causes for this, such as
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transportation
expenses, labor salaries, and
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other
increasing
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costs
, among others, and there are
also
subjective factors, such as a rise in retail
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prices
of certain persons or organizations who
are motivated
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only
by profit.

During the social distancing lockdown, each transaction
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gets
more complicated,
particularly
when
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products
are transported
. Increased expenses for
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items
are
also
a
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result
of increased
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transportation
, labor, and
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driver
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costs
,
as well
as damaged
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goods
and
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other
losses as a
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result
of extended rotation.
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, all
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drivers
who travel through the quarantine station
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must
have a COVID-19
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test
certificate,
yet
medical units
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only
provide
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testing
for those who have
been isolated
, not
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testing
services.
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, the
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capacity of the epidemic-
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affected
locations has been inadequate and
insufficiently
responsive. The validity time of the
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test
card is not
explicitly
stated in the
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test
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results
.
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firms and
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drivers
have
been forced
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stop
their activities as a
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result
. As a
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, most
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drivers
and escorts have not
been vaccinated
, as the vaccine
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supply
is
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very
restricted. This produces worry since it takes time to conduct
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tests
,
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costs
money to conduct
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tests
, concerns about becoming infected,
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costs
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testing
, moving in and out of
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epidemic
regions
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must
be confined
for 21 days, and does not want to engage in the movement of
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products
. Local driving and car shortages
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result
from this. Deterioration of the quality and quantity of agricultural
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goods
occurs since they
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must
pass through multiple checkpoints during
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transportation
for consumption, despite having comprehensive documentation on
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epidemic
prevention and management.
Thus
, the rise in the
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price
of
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products
is a
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result
of the
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cost
of making COVID-19
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tests
, shipping expenses, labor
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costs
,
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drivers
, damaged
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goods
, and the loss of fresh
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items
owing to the extended circulation period.

When the
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epidemic
situation is severe, buyers are willing to queue for hours in front of
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food
stalls such as supermarkets, mini-supermarkets, convenience stores, markets, and groceries. Regardless of the
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price
of the
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food
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item
, buyers
are determined
to
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come
in and
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purchase
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food
stored in the family and to limit their outings. Nonetheless, when purchasers approach the
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food
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market
, they
are faced
with a lack of alternatives or
possibly
nothing to
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purchase
. This indicates that consumer
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demand
for
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food
has increased across all markets, which could
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result
in
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supply
shortages in certain areas.
Additionally
, several major and
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small
businesses, such as wholesale marketplaces or grocery shops,
were compelled
to
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leave
the
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market
due to the complexity of their
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supply
chains, making it impossible for the state to control and determine the source of the sickness. While
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demand
for
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food
is growing,
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supply
is constrained
, indicating a severe
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food
scarcity in areas where the pandemic is complex, like Vietnam's Ho Chi Minh City.
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Other
organizations have profited from this inelastic
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demand
phenomenon by boosting the
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prices
of their
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food
by 2-3 times the
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market
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price
in order to earn a profit and raise their total revenue.
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,
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some
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people
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purchase
price-stabilizing
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foods
in
extremely
large amounts from supermarkets to resell them at a profit.

In general
, the considerable rise in
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transportation
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costs
and expenditures incurred during transit is the objective explanation for the period's high
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food
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prices
;
nevertheless
, subjective factors
also
exist such as profitability and revenue growth for a variety of
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big
and
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small
businesses. The
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good
news is that Saigon Co. op is one of the leading large enterprises that are under a great deal of pressure from
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costs
incurred in
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transportation
,
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testing
, and personnel difficulties,
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but
Saigon Co. op has refused to raise the
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price
of
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products
in order to share the spending pressure with the
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people
.

Through the COVID-19
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epidemic
, in the future, as a seller, I have learned to share spending pressure with consumers to build sustainability between sellers and buyers.
Furthermore
, the application of technological technology in commerce, such as spending and revenue management software, can
simply
control
as well
as
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save
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a lot of
money and restrict the
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cost
of
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products
increases. As a businesswoman, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
maintain my reputation, be honest, offer high-quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
items
, and avoid selling counterfeit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
that endanger clients' health.
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IELTS essay Using the concepts of trade, demand, supply, and market explains why the price of food has increased so much in Ho Chi Minh City during the social distancing lockdown. What did you learn from the lockdown time?

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