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Using Mobile phone is important for students. Gives your opinion

Using Mobile phone is important for students. Gives your opinion obGDV
Nowadays in the era of technology people’s use various devise in their daily life like Phone, computer, laptop ect. all are this so useful to man. A man cannot lead a Normal life without those equipment. We lives a global village by Using this devices, one can connect with others anywhere in the world by Using technical things. Phone and computer helps students Their study purpose, basically they get all information from via internet. Can send sms, email, fax other's. Admittedly we can see our relatives, friend anywhere in the world by video chat. Easily contract anyone. Computer works continuously and MORE accurately than man. A large number of people use this things for business purpose.
Nowadays in the era of technology
people
’s
use
various devise in their daily life like Phone, computer, laptop
ect
.
all
are this
so
useful to
man
. A
man
cannot lead a Normal life without
those equipment
. We
lives
a global village by Using
this
devices, one can connect with others anywhere in the world by Using technical things. Phone and computer
helps
students Their study purpose,
basically
they
get
all information from via internet. Can
send
sms
, email, fax other's.
Admittedly
we can
see
our relatives, friend anywhere in the world by video chat.
Easily
contract anyone. Computer works
continuously
and MORE
accurately
than
man
.
A large number of
people
use
this
things for business purpose.
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IELTS essay Using Mobile phone is important for students. Gives your opinion

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