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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree。

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. 。 A0Xx
It is consider that study is increasing day by day and it is important for everyone. i think all male nd female are equally important in the university. i agree with statement. I will discuss it reasons in the upcoming paragraph. To embark on, there are several reasons why I think both are equally important in the universities. people lead to best future. they achieve many knowledge. they can good business man in their life. However, there are Polthora reasons some people think that man nd woman are important in university. frist of all, People do communications are good. People always in the best their life. In conclusion, both are equally important all the unversity.
It is
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consider
that study is increasing day by day and it is
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important
for everyone.
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i
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think
all male
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nd
female are
equally
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important
in the university.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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agree
with statement. I will discuss it reasons in the upcoming paragraph.

To embark on, there are several reasons why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
both are
equally
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important
in the universities.
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people
lead
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the best".
to best
future.
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they
achieve
Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much knowledge", "a good deal of knowledge".
many knowledge
.
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they
can
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good
business
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man
in their life.

However
, there are
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Polthora
reasons
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some
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people
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think
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
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nd
woman are
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important
in university.
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frist
of all,
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People
do communications are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.
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People
always in the best their life.

In conclusion
, both are
equally
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important
all the
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unversity
.

IELTS essay Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. 。

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
115 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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