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Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree? OR With the development of media online, there is no future for radio. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. OR With the development of media online, there is no future for radio. mBqL
In the old days, radio broadcasting was considered as one of the most important and convenient sources of information. However, with the advent of other forms of mass media, some people perceive that radio is on the verge of extinction in the future if it does not undergo any significant change. In my opinion however, the radio will stand the test of time. In the next few paragraphs, I will be explaining my opinion in detail. One of the main reasons why radio would not become obsolete soon is that driving cars is emerging as a way of life across the world. Radio is installed in cars and listening while driving is a good idea for taking full advantage of their time and obtaining the latest information, such as news, weather forecast, society, and so forth. Increase in usage of cars gives more scope for the radios. For those people who have no time watching the box, radio provides immediate and easy access to information. Its continued survival is also connected to its high affordability. Radio broadcasting is, in general, accessible to the audience free of charge. Another obvious advantage is that the radio set is portable and convenient. On occasions where people cannot watch TV, read the newspaper or surf the internet, they can resort to the radio. There are many other electronic devices, such as mp3 and mp4 players, which help people enjoy various entertainment programs at their convenience. Although people think a radio is unable to convey messages with images and motions as television and the internet does, the advent of other technologies has also reinforced the popularity of radio. To summarize, radio broadcasting has more benefits than drawbacks. The remarkable improvements in technology will enable the radio to perform more and become more widely available. There is no doubt that radio broadcasting will continue to account for a very substantial segment of the mass media market.
In the
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days,
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radio
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was considered
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important
and convenient sources of information.
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, with the advent of other forms of mass media,
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some
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people
perceive that
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radio
is on the verge of extinction in the future if it does not undergo any significant
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change
. In my opinion
however
, the
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radio
will stand the
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test
of time. In the
next
few paragraphs, I will be explaining my opinion in detail.

One of the main reasons why
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radio
would not become obsolete
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soon
is that driving cars is emerging as a way of life across the world.
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Radio
is installed
in cars and listening while driving is a
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good
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idea
for taking full advantage of their time and obtaining the latest information, such as news, weather forecast, society, and
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so
forth. Increase in usage of cars gives more scope for the radios.

For those
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people
who have no time watching the box,
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radio
provides immediate and easy access to information. Its continued survival is
also
connected to its high affordability.
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Radio
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broadcasting
is,
in general
, accessible to the audience free of charge. Another obvious advantage is that the
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radio
set is portable and convenient. On occasions where
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people
cannot
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watch
TV, read the newspaper or surf the internet, they can resort to the
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radio
. There are
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many
other electronic devices, such as mp3 and mp4 players, which
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help
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people
enjoy various entertainment programs at their convenience.

Although
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people
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think
a
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radio
is unable to convey messages with images and motions as television and the internet does, the advent of other technologies has
also
reinforced the popularity of radio.

To summarize
,
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radio
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broadcasting
has more benefits than drawbacks. The remarkable improvements in technology will enable the
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radio
to perform more and become more
widely
available. There is no doubt that
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radio
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broadcasting
will continue to account for a
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very
substantial segment of the mass media market.
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IELTS essay Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. OR With the development of media online, there is no future for radio.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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