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The effect of unauthorised behaviour, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial infuence of belching and unaccepted behaviuor has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people in modern offices in the recent years. It can be said that unacceptable is worse in everywhere even start from small business to expanded entreprises, it has drawbacks as well. This essay will elaborate how this typpe of behaviour is not accepted in the world and how it can reduce efficiency and producivity in modern business environment and thus lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why this kind of nature is not authorised, but the most conpicuous one stems from the fact that not only it spoils the whole environment in business but also harms business reputation, ultimatley business entity goes down. For example, if any employee do this type of behaviour in workplace that effects other staff members as well, which continue grows in the environment. So it is elixir to prevent such type of behaviour. Another key justification for upholding the key notion is that it also reduce productivity due to employees misbehave and others can not concentrate on work and sometimes people have deadlines to complete the certain taske. For instance, Bulling and harrassment is also this type of behavious, which is unacceptable in the world. Hence, it puts pressure on whole environment which is not acceptable anywhere in the world. From what has been discussed above, it can be said that the impact of this type of behaiour is prominent although the way it effects other should be well handled.
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now
become more controversial. The substantial
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infuence
of belching and unaccepted
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behaviuor
has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on
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people
in modern offices in the recent years. It can
be said
that unacceptable is worse in everywhere even
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start
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small
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business
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entreprises
, it has drawbacks
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typpe
of
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behaviour
is not
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accepted
in the world and how it can
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reduce
efficiency and
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producivity
in modern
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business
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environment
and
thus
lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why this kind of nature is not
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,
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but
the most
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one stems from the fact that not
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it spoils the whole
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environment
in
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business
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but
also
harms
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business
reputation,
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ultimatley
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business
entity goes down.
For example
, if any employee do this
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type
of
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behaviour
in workplace that effects other staff members
as well
, which continue grows in the
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environment
.
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So
it is elixir to
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prevent
such
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type
of
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behaviour
.

Another key justification for upholding the key notion is that it
also
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reduce
productivity due to employees misbehave
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and others
can not concentrate on work and
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sometimes
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people
have deadlines to complete the certain
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taske
.
For instance
, Bulling and
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harrassment
is
also
this
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type
of
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behavious
, which is unacceptable in the world.
Hence
, it puts pressure on whole
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environment
which is not acceptable anywhere in the world.

From what has
been discussed
above, it can
be said
that the impact of this
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type
of
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behaiour
is prominent although the way it effects other should be well handled.
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IELTS essay unacceptable behavior

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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