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Traditional Face-to-face Classroom Promotes Better Learning Environment

Traditional Face-to-face Classroom Promotes Better Learning Environment VY01w

Due to the widespread of COVID-19, classes are forced to be carried out online. As a student in this era, I am fortunate to experience both traditional face-to-face classes and online classes. However, in my point of view, I think that traditional face-to-face classroom promotes a better learning environment. This is because traditional classroom promotes interpersonal interactions, provides hands-on experience, and boosts students’ motivation.

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the widespread of
 COVID-19, classes are forced
 to be carried
 out online. As a student in this era, I am fortunate to experience both traditional face-to-face classes and online classes. However
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think
 that traditional face-to-face classroom promotes a better learning environment. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 traditional classroom promotes interpersonal interactions, provides hands-on experience, and boosts students’ motivation. 