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Traditional Face-to-face Classroom Promotes Better Learning Environment

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Due to the widespread of COVID-19, classes are forced to be carried out online. As a student in this era, I am fortunate to experience both traditional face-to-face classes and online classes. However, in my point of view, I think that traditional face-to-face classroom promotes a better learning environment. This is because traditional classroom promotes interpersonal interactions, provides hands-on experience, and boosts students’ motivation.
Due to
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the widespread of
COVID-19, classes
are forced
to
be carried
out online. As a student in this era, I am fortunate to experience both traditional face-to-face classes and online classes.
However
, in my point of view, I
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think
that traditional face-to-face classroom promotes a better learning environment. This is
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traditional classroom promotes interpersonal interactions, provides hands-on experience, and boosts students’ motivation.

IELTS essay Traditional Face-to-face Classroom Promotes Better Learning Environment

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