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Today s government struggles to create enough housing for increasing populations while protecting the environment Give your opinion

Today s government struggles to create enough housing for increasing populations while protecting the environment Give your opinion pRD7w
The government has a hard time to make shelter to match with the growth of population. The Government also faces difficulties to protect the environment simultaneously. The elobatration of challenges faced by government shall be discussed below. Every government of a country has huge responsibities on them. Massive aspects must be considered to sustain longevity and success. The government is burdened with numerous tasks. Making housing available for everyone in the country can be problematic. To provide shelter for everyone more area would be required. The government must balance the nature of environemnt simultaneously. Initiatives must be promoted to provide enough shelter and protect the environment. Government has the authority to bring in attractive schemes suitable for both. In the over populated countries these initiatives must be taken at the earliest. Such promotion helps in creating awareness amongst the people. As the government has access to everyone it can create such alert schemes with environment The government can provide more employment to residents by various means. With there being an demand of more shelter than before the number in job employment can also rise. These strategic plans can help the local citizens in obtaining a place of their own simultaneously earn extra.
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government
has a
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hard
time to
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make
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shelter
to match with the growth of population. The
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Government
also
faces difficulties to protect the
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environment


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simultaneously
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The
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elobatration
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government
shall
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below.

Every
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government
of a country has huge
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responsibities
on them. Massive aspects
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must
be considered
to sustain longevity and success. The
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government
is burdened
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with


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numerous
tasks. Making housing available for everyone in the country can be problematic. To provide
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shelter
for everyone more area would
be required
. The
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government


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must
balance the nature of
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environemnt
simultaneously
. Initiatives
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must
be promoted
to provide
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enough
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shelter
and protect the environment.
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Government
has
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the


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authority
to bring in attractive schemes suitable for both.

In the over populated countries these initiatives
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must
be taken
at the earliest. Such promotion
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helps
in creating awareness amongst the
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people
. As the
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government
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has


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access
to everyone it can create such alert schemes with environment The
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government
can provide more employment to residents by various means. With there being
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an
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demand


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of
more
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shelter
than
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before
the number in job employment can
also
rise. These strategic plans can
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help
the local citizens in obtaining a place of their
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own
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simultaneously


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earn
extra.
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IELTS essay Today s government struggles to create enough housing for increasing populations while protecting the environment Give your opinion

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
202 words
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