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Some people think its better to live with a roommate Other people prefer to live alone Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Some people think its better to live with a roommate Other people prefer to live alone Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer JoQPE
Most of us live in hostels where we can either share the room or live alone. In my opinion I think its better to share the room with a roommate. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. Firstly, when we are away from our family, we are likely to fall homesick and if we share our rooms with a roommate, we have a person to share our emotions and feelings. Also, roommates will be able to guide us and help us through the college days. Living alone can often put us in depression and thoughts of loneliness, whereas when you have the right roommate you will always have a person to exchange your thoughts. For example, if your bad a particular subject and that being the very same subject your roommate is good at, you can always learn together. Secondly, the bond you will be sharing will be just beautiful. You will definitely get a best friend who will look after you at all times. The memories made with a roommate will be really memorable and looking back after years we wont regret it. They will take care of you when you fall sick. For example, I was doing part-time job while I was studying and once, I fell ill and that’s when I realized how lucky I was to have an amazing roommate who not only took notes for me in class but, also, she covered my shift at work so that I will won’t have a loss of pay. I am still grateful to her for that kind act of hers. In conclusion, I would like to end by saying that its always better to live with a roommate rather than living alone. This is because you will have a special bond and a person to support you at the times of need which wouldn’t be possible if we live alone.
Most of us
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in hostels where we can either
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share
the room or
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live
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alone
. In my opinion I
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think
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its


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better
to
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share
the room with a
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roommate
. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in
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the


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following
essay.

Firstly
, when we are away from our family, we are likely to fall homesick and if we
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share
our rooms

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with
a
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roommate
, we have a person to
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share
our emotions and feelings.
Also
,
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roommates
will be

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able
to guide us and
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help
us through the college days. Living
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alone
can
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often
put us in
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depression


and thoughts of loneliness, whereas when you have the right
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roommate
you will always have a

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person
to exchange your thoughts.
For example
, if your
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bad
a particular subject and that being
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the


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very
same subject your
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roommate
is
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good
at, you can always learn together.

Secondly
, the bond you will be sharing will be
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just
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beautiful
. You will definitely
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get
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a
best friend
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who


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will
look after you at all times. The memories made with a
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roommate
will be
really
memorable
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and


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looking
back after years we
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wont
regret it. They will take care of you when you fall sick.
For example
,

I was doing part-time job while I was studying and once, I fell ill and that’s when I realized how lucky

I was to have an amazing
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roommate
who not
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only
took notes for me in
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class
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but
,
also
, she covered

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my
shift at work
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so
that I will won’t have a loss of pay. I am
still
grateful to her for that kind act
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of


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hers
.

In conclusion
, I would like to
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end
by saying that its always better to
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live
with a
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roommate
rather


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than
living
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alone
. This is
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because
you will have a special bond and a person to support you at
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the


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times
of need which wouldn’t be possible if we
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live
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.
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IELTS essay Some people think its better to live with a roommate Other people prefer to live alone Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Essay
  American English
19 paragraphs
321 words
5.5
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