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Today more people are travelling than before .why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

Nowadays, the trend of visiting other places is drastically increasing among people comparing to the past. This essay will discuss the main causes of travelling including its accessibility and the elsewhere desire, as well as its benefits for those people like relaxing and exploration of other culture and countries. There are many reasons for travelling, the most important is accessibility in term of costs. In other words, new technologies have assured that competition between transport companies and travel agencies have increased, which in turn pushes travelling fees down. Moreover, the internet turns the world to a small village, from where they wish to go abroad for studying, working and relaxing has become easier than before. For instance, for a few euros, it is definitely possible to book a flight around the world with a click, which was impossible back in days. Therefore the desire to travel has enhanced with the globalization. Travelling offers many advantages for the traveller, the major benefit is the exploration of other cultures and places. To elaborate it, the interaction with local people help to learn about their culture, traditions and the way of thinking, which is a great experience that would help people to grow as a person. one other gain is the discovering and the enjoying of new landscapes which are probably different from people hometowns, indeed the relaxing from what people will benefit and charge their batteries. For instance, many studies showed a strong link between travelling and human wellbeing. Thus travelling is beneficial to get in shape. To conclude, the tendency of travelling is very common between masses. There are many reasons for that, the main one is the availability of conditions and the thirst to discover the world. There are also many benefits like the experience and the relaxing from the busy
Nowadays, the trend of visiting
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other
places is
drastically
increasing among
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people
comparing to the past. This essay will discuss the main causes of
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travelling
including its accessibility and the
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elsewhere desire
,
as well
as its
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benefits
for those
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people
like
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relaxing
and exploration of
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other
culture and countries.

There are
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many
reasons for
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travelling
, the most
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important
is accessibility
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in term of
costs. In
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other
words, new technologies have assured that competition between transport
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companies
and travel agencies have increased, which in turn pushes
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travelling
fees down.
Moreover
, the internet turns the world to a
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small
village, from where they wish to go abroad for studying, working and
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relaxing
has become easier than
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before
.
For instance
, for a few euros, it is definitely possible to book a flight around the world with a click, which was impossible back in days.
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Therefore
the desire to travel has enhanced with the globalization.

Travelling offers
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many
advantages for the
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traveller
, the major
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benefit
is the exploration of
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other
cultures and places. To elaborate it, the interaction with local
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people
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help
to learn about their culture, traditions and the way of thinking, which is a great experience that would
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help
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people
to grow as a person.
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one
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other
gain is the discovering and the enjoying of new landscapes which are
probably
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different
from
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people
hometowns,
indeed
the
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relaxing
from what
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people
will
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benefit
and charge their batteries.
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,
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many
studies
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showed
a strong link between
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travelling
and human wellbeing.
Thus
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travelling
is beneficial to
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get
in shape.

To conclude
, the tendency of
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travelling
is
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very
common between masses. There are
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many
reasons for that, the main one is the availability of conditions and the thirst to discover the world. There are
also
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many
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benefits
like the experience and the
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relaxing
from the
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busy
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IELTS essay Today more people are travelling than before. why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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