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To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the household waste are considerably increasing. In addition, nobody try to fix the problem and call the government to solve it. Many people think that the authority should make some laws to maintain the recycling process. I will discuss about legal requirement as a way to increase recycling and the other ways. Firstly, should it be compulsory for people to recycle their waste? The environmental issue is one of the main problem of our world and we don’t help it. Government should make some decisions about recycling and maybe put some taxes on income about this. For example, if you don’t respect the good bin or if you product too much waste you should be punish. Usually, people only do the right thing because of rules, so it might be possible to change a person as an eco-friendly. Moreover, instead of punishing people they could give people a reward for their good action or even a large number of recycled waste. On the other hand, many ways could also enhance the responsibility to recycle. Laws are not the only outcome, there is also the way to reward someone. In Peking, people can change plastic bottle for underground ticket for example. This could be a reason that people recycle more and try to be more aware about ecology. In addition, in some countries the sensibilisation about recycling is well-known in school. Teachers are teaching to children how to recycle their waste, why and where put their waste. Sooner people are aware and better will improve the recycling process. To sum up, regulate this process could give desire to people to recycle their domestic waste. However, even with taxes and rules about recycling people should be reward. In addition to the government, school should have a great impact and highlight how important are there actions since the youngest age. As far as I am concerned, I think that if people recycle less they should reduce their waste.
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fix
the problem and call the
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government
to solve it.
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people
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think
that the authority should
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make
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some
laws to maintain the
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recycling
process. I will discuss about legal requirement as a way to increase
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recycling
and the other ways.

Firstly
, should it be compulsory for
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people
to
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recycle
their
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waste
? The environmental issue is one of the main problem of our world and we don’t
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help
it.
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Government
should
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make
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some
decisions about
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recycling
and maybe put
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some
taxes on income about this.
For example
, if you don’t respect the
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good
bin or if you product too much
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waste
you should be punish.
Usually
,
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people
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only
do the right thing
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because
of
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rules
,
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it might be possible to
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change
a person as an eco-friendly.
Moreover
,
instead
of punishing
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people
they could give
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people
a reward for their
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good
action or even a large number of recycled waste.

On the other hand
,
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many
ways could
also
enhance the responsibility to
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recycle
. Laws are not the
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only
outcome, there is
also
the way to reward someone. In Peking,
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people
can
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change
plastic bottle for underground ticket
for example
. This could be a reason that
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people
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recycle
more and try to be more aware about ecology.
In addition
, in
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some
countries the sensibilisation about
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recycling
is well-known in school. Teachers are teaching to children how to
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recycle
their
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waste
, why and where put their
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waste
. Sooner
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people
are aware and better will
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improve
the
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recycling
process.

To sum up, regulate this process could give desire to
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people
to
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recycle
their domestic
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waste
.
However
, even with taxes and
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rules
about
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recycling
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people
should be reward.
In addition
to the
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government
, school should have a great impact and highlight how
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important
are there actions since the youngest age. As far as I
am concerned
, I
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think
that if
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people
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recycle
less they should
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reduce
their
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waste
.
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IELTS essay To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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