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To solve environment problems individuals should be responsible not the government. Do you agree or disagree

It is irrefutable that, environment is indispensible for human survival. People should responsible for the environment menace not the authority. This essay disagree with this statement because of a number of unfavourable reasons. On the one hand, government should make strict rules against environment. firstly, the authority should transfer the large campanies from urban areas to rural areas in this way the government can decrease the level of smoke in the city. Because there is huge amount of population is already in the urban areas. A recent report by environment publish that last year 25000 indutries are move to countryside areas and air pollution is decrease by 20 percent. On the other hand, government should provide more and more public transport system among the masses because peope have own vehicles so they are not using other transport which is sponsored by govermnet. if the government are increasing the transport system which has low fair and comfortable route system. so in this way the people are mostly use government transport system. for instance, last year in UNITED KINDOM the people were used only 10percent of their own vehicles because the are mostly travel in the public transport. TO conclude, the government is totally responsible for cure the environment not the folks. A government have right to make different kind of rules for the environment by provide more public transport and move the large campanies outside the city.
It is irrefutable that,
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environment
is
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indispensible
for human survival.

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People
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should responsible
for the
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environment
menace not the authority.

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This essay disagree
with this statement
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because
of a number of
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unfavourable
reasons.

On the one hand,
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government
should
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make
strict
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rules
against
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environment
.
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firstly
, the authority should transfer the large
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campanies
from urban
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areas
to rural
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areas
in this way the
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government
can decrease the level of smoke in the city.
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Because
there is huge amount of population is already in the urban
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areas
. A recent report by
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environment
publish that last year 25000
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indutries
are
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move
to countryside
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areas
and air pollution is decrease by 20 percent.

On the other hand
,
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government
should provide more and more public
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transport
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system
among the masses
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because
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peope
have
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own
vehicles
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so
they are not using other
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transport
which
is sponsored
by
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govermnet
.
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if
the
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government
are increasing the
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transport
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system
which has low
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fair
and comfortable route
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system
.
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so
in this way the
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people
are
mostly
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use
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government
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transport
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system
.
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for
instance, last year in UNITED
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KINDOM
the
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people
were
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used
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only
10percent of their
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own
vehicles
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because
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the are
mostly
travel in the public transport.

TO conclude
, the
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government
is
totally
responsible for cure the
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environment
not the folks. A
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have right to
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make
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different
kind of
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rules
for the
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environment
by provide more public
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transport
and
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move
the large
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campanies
outside the city.

IELTS essay To solve environment problems individuals should be responsible not the government.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
236 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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