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Three years ago, because of flooding at the Western Palean Wildlife Preserve, 100 lions and 100 western gazelles were moved to the East Palean Preserve, an area that is home to most of the same species that are found in the western preserve, though in lar

Three years ago, because of flooding at the Western Palean Wildlife Preserve, 100 lions and 100 western gazelles were moved to the East Palean Preserve, an area that is home to most of the same species that are found in the western preserve, though in lar m15j1

While it may seem that disappearance of gazelle must have been causedd by larger number of predators in the eastern province but there is lot of weaknesses in the argument. It is stated that 100 western gazelles were moved to the East Palean, but the age or health of theses gazellas is not mentioned. Maybe most of the gazellas imported were old and weak. Maybe gazellas were weak and suffering from diseases before they were transferred. Also all of the gazelles imported can be of same gender, that would made it impossible for this gazelles to mate with each other and produce children. Gazellas in the eastern province are close relative to western province, but it is not known if they can mate with each other. Moreover, climate conditions in eastern provonce is somewhat similar to western province, rain is little less. Maybe gazellas require even more rain for survival than in western province, slight reduction in rain would have made them more vulnerable. Maybe the number of gazellas was already on decline in western province due to less rainfall, and even slight less reduction in rainfall would have made their. Furthermore, it is written eastern province contains most of the species that are found in western province, which means it does not contain all species of western province. Maybe the species on which gazellas fed are not present in this area. Gazellas would have died because of starvation. Additionally, it is not mentioned if the population of only gazellas is reduced or population of other large animals is also reduced. Reduction in population can be due to presence of hunters or poachers. There may be natural disaster or disease epidemic that might have reduced the populations of animals

While it may seem that disappearance of gazelle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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causedd
 by larger number of predators in the eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there is It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 weaknesses in the argument.

It is stated
 that 100 western gazelles were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
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Palean
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the age or health of theses Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 is not mentioned. Maybe most of the Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 imported were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and weak. Maybe Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 were weak and suffering from diseases This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they were transferred
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 gazelles imported can be of same gender, that would The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "make"make
made
 it impossible for Did you mean "these"?these
this
 gazelles to mate with each other and produce children. Possible spelling mistake found.Gazelles
Gazellas
 in the eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
 are close relative to western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is not known if they can mate with each other.

Moreover
, climate conditions in eastern Possible spelling mistake found.provinceProvenceprov once
provonce
 is somewhat similar to western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
, rain is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 less. Maybe Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 require even more rain for survival than in western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
, slight reduction in rain would have made them more vulnerable. Maybe the number of Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 was already on decline in western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
 due to less rainfall, and even slight less reduction in rainfall would have made their.

Furthermore
, it is written
 eastern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
 contains most of the species that are found
 in western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
, which means it does not contain all species of western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdistrictzoneregioncolonycountypart
province
. Maybe the species on which Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 fed are not present in this area. Possible spelling mistake found.Gazelles
Gazellas
 would have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of starvation.

Additionally
, it is not mentioned if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
Possible spelling mistake found.gazelles
gazellas
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of other large animals is also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
. Reduction in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 can be due to presence of hunters or poachers. There may be natural disaster or disease epidemic that might have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
populations
 of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphanimals.animals!animals?animals:animals,animals;
animals