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These are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others thinks having a range of subject is better for a children’s future. Discuss both side and give your opinion

These are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others thinks having a range of subject is better for a children’s future. Discuss both side and give your opinion 1NVX

On the one hand, there are some educational pioneers believe that book knowledge is not sufficient for careers, schools must add further curriculum activities for children like a small project, science fair, and many more. This kind of activities can create opportunities for children when they are working on it. For Instance, if a school organized a science fair activities of various small projects, then children will learn how to create something new which is not in books what they studies in class.

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some
 educational pioneers believe that book knowledge is not sufficient for careers, schools This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
further
 curriculum activities for children like a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 project, science This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. This kind of activities can create opportunities for children when they are working on it. For Instance
, if a school organized a science This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 activities of various This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 projects, then children will learn how to create something new which is not in books what they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "study"study
studies
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
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