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there have been many technological developments in 20th century for example transport, telecommunication and health. How has it changed peoples lives.?. Have all the changes been positive.?

in 20th century lots of technological advancements have been in achieved in variety of domains such as transport, telecommunication and wealth and these advancements has affected peoples live very effectively in both ways. In my opinion telecommunication is the backbone of human development. nowadays most of the people on globe have possession of smartphones. before 20th century when the advancement in telecommunication was less. People used to face a lot of troubles while communicating. People at that time were not so concerned about education. but after technological revolution they received everything they were deprived of such as flexibility in networks which helps to have seamless conversations. Video call features were also introduced as a part of same. As the telecommunications services grew rapidly they came up with lots of services along with strong networks such as social media apps, news apps and other services etc. And with social media and news apps they can stay updated and connected with current affairs almost anytime and anywhere. However people are getting hooked to these advancements like a glue. They are spending their majority of time on such things which is more than enough and harmful also for the health. It also releases radiations which results into headache sometimes and some other troubles are also encountered such as poor eyesight, depression, dark circles and lack of concentration. To conclude with telecommunication plays very important part in our development though it has many side effects and people should understand this. But still its helping humans to progress, evolve and grow in a lot of ways and that is the most positive impact and advancements human generations can ever have.
in
20th century
lots
of technological
advancements
have been in achieved in variety of domains such as transport, telecommunication and wealth and these
advancements
has
affected
peoples
live
very
effectively
in both ways. In my opinion telecommunication is the backbone of human development.
nowadays
most of the
people
on globe have possession of smartphones.
before
20th century when the
advancement
in telecommunication was less.
People
used
to face a
lot
of troubles while communicating.
People
at that time were not
so
concerned about education.
but
after technological revolution they received everything they
were deprived
of such as flexibility in networks which
helps
to have seamless conversations. Video call features were
also
introduced as a part of same. As the
telecommunications
services grew
rapidly
they came up with
lots
of services along with strong networks such as social media apps, news apps and other services etc. And with social media and news apps they can stay updated and connected with
current
affairs almost anytime and anywhere.
However
people
are getting hooked to these
advancements
like a glue. They are spending their majority of time on such things which is more than
enough
and harmful
also
for the health. It
also
releases radiations which results into headache
sometimes
and
some
other troubles are
also
encountered such as poor eyesight, depression, dark circles and lack of concentration.
To conclude
with telecommunication plays
very
important
part in our development though it has
many
side effects and
people
should understand this.
But
still
its helping humans to progress, evolve and grow in a
lot
of ways and
that is
the most
positive
impact and
advancements
human generations can ever have.
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IELTS essay there have been many technological developments in 20th century for example transport, telecommunication and health. How has it changed peoples lives. ? . Have all the changes been positive. ?

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